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Can't help but feel the way i do
Never thought anyone could be so true
My feelings are real no doubt about that
It's so hard to put into words, i know you have my back

But I can't sit here and have the feelings i feel and not do a damn thing
Truth is whenever i am with you, my heart sings
I know your confused, trust me i am to
But I can't keep walking not knowing what to do

My life has never been better, everthings back on track
But what you need in your life, i feel i lack.
No matter what happens you'll be in my heart forever
No matter what happens, we'll always be together.

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Written July 21st, 2005

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  • dying-rose
    September 16, 2006
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    why would u have a bad feeling??? i thought of this poem cause i thought u were coming bakc to me


  • east efforts
    September 15, 2006
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    i like this one kate, even though i have a bad feeling about it... good job

  • Gogetalife
    August 14, 2005
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    Wonderful poem..you expressed yourself in a fantastic way..your emotions are jumping from ur page..great job..good luck


  • tearrsofthemoon
    August 14, 2005
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    wow I really like this poem, great way of expressing your emotions and feelings. I can relate to this is some ways. Excellent write! Nice job!


  • Erotik Rose silver member
    August 14, 2005
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    This is a very good poem it expresses your emotions very well. I always enjoy reading love poems and how others express thier feelings, this is a great write


  • mysticshrooms
    August 13, 2005
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    wow this is almost like my g/f and i, i love it alot. ive entered to emily in your contest and it expresses my love to her. she hasnt read it yet, but i hope she likes it, makes me nervous sometimes, lol. great write, your added to my fav. list on my page, check it out if you want.

    -will


  • megz
    August 13, 2005
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    i love this poem and can really realte to it its kind ashow i feel with ym whole b/f thign and all caus ehtinga are soo much betetr when im with him and tht its really awesome i love it great job very well written flows wonderfully

  • donfez
    July 21, 2005
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    a very nice pice, true how thwe confusion with ur loved one messes up ur whole life

  • Poetically Pathetic
    July 21, 2005
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    I really like this poem alot. Its a well written piece. I love it. Great job!

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