Butterflies are such beautiful creatures
Unusual colours adorn their wings.
Two flew close to me one day
They looked so pretty I stopped!
Ever stand and watch a butterfly
Rising with the breeze?
Flowers attract them by their scent
Lovingly enticing them to drink,
Isn't it a glorious sight to see?
Everytime I see one flying free a
Smile lights up my face with joy.
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I have read 2 others in the contest, will read the others soon.
Written July 21st, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Spell Out by AngelicDemon.
300 points, ended July 30, 2005, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This great poem
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Beautiful
This lady writes in simplest form, yet beauty she shows us within her words. She like a butterfly alights within the garden of our lives for a moment. Releasing us from our jam jar prisons with her heartfelt words. -
hey we wre runing the smartere as the days goes by frind i realy like ur way of writing
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the way u write joyfully is the way ther bring abt good harmony to ur live by smile jenni it is a nice writign i have seen for last 3month i have not step in to read ur work what a nice writing absolutely nice
and as nice acrostic u done here too u growing smarter every day -
Dear sweet lovable Vic, you give such lovely comments, they make my heart melt
AWWWw you were ill? but you are OK now 
I'm glad you liked my Butterfly poem
from your Pluff Pluff spongey doll
Jenni
What! a kiss for Lady Joan
and none for me?
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4 stars ****
lool... butterfly.. are just so jennifer-like.. they are like my pluff pluff spongey doll.. they are always charming.. and you always want to catch them but they get away... they always give you delight... and they always give you the real smile on your face.. they glitter in the sky.. and in your eyes.. and you always want to be with butterflies and jennifer 
nice write dear.. sorry to be late.. i was lil ill.. so cudnt get on ..... anyways.. i ish always available for miss buterfly jennifer
good work..do give my ragards to lady joan to lady joan.. keep yourself away dirty girl 
thanks for sharing
hugs and kisses
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend........... just keep it up............ your humble little friend...........
......... ............ ............ - vic ( who else? )
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LOL Yemm, are you ever any other way especially around Mari Thank you for the lovely comment.
Jenni
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As a kid I remember seeing butterflies everywhere. I don't see many anymore. Monarchs are almost non-existent. Pesticides I guess. Ah well, that's progress, lol.
Your poem flutters like a butterfly and now I'm dizzy.
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I like this one ^-^ butterflies are marvelous (O.O;;; did i spell that right?) little creatures. have you ever sat at the edge of a flower graden or meadow and just watched them? It a beautiful sight and I enjoy it when I get a chance to see it... one day I wanna be a butterfly x) to be a free spirit such as that would be wonderous.
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WELL DONE
Well done. I throw my hat in the air and cheer. This is great,
Hugs
Jan
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