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Sweet love...

Glances,
Understanding
Unspoken Emotions
Acknowledged, accepted, given,
Pleasure!

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Written July 21st, 2005

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  • estelm4
    July 23, 2005
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    um- Ive changed it to pleasure-


  • estelm4
    July 23, 2005
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    'e' as in cliche...


  • estelm4
    July 23, 2005
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    okok- Allpoetry is a bit off track- Blase means plasured.


  • estelm4
    July 23, 2005
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    I meant "Blasé" which I accidentally mis typed.

  • ankuraa
    July 21, 2005
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    Its nice Kavn. But why r u bored with glances? There must be a meaning 4 that word. Do put it in ur author's comment...
    I take it as meaning that glances are overrated. Am I correct? Anyway... Keep cinqing.U have it in u!

  • laya
    July 21, 2005
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    good

    true.i dono get the place for blase.rest do capture.beautiful.

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