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Lost and Alone

Heartache fills my soul,
while god hates me.
Please help me,
I'm lost and alone.

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Written July 20th, 2005

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  • Wierdone4eva
    July 21, 2005
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    Thank you for your wonderfull comment. I really appriciate it.

    ~Clara~


  • lovestinks
    July 21, 2005
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    so short, and so deep at the same time. this is a good one. The backround freaks me out.. but at the same time it works well with the write. - i promise you, God doesnt hate you.- great job- and thanx for sharing


  • amykat
    July 21, 2005
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    short n tense i likey ~AmY~ p.s. your writing are all wicked