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I Can Only Dream Of His Love

I can only dream of a place with the greatest things appearing before my eyes.
Of a love so great that there is never a worry in my life,
Of a person that really cares about me,
Of a high off of love.
I can only dream of the tender kisses I'll receive from him,
Of the non-stop thoughts of this wonderful person,
Of the cravings to be with him,
Of the feelings when I go to see him,
The mutating butterflies that transfer into pterodactyls.
I can only dream of this wonderful person.

Oh Shit!!!!
I realized, unless my life is a dream,
My dream has become reality.


!i!i!i!i!I love you Bobby E. Hall!i!i!i!i!

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I am soo happy... Yay! Jump for joy.... Do party boy dance!
Written July 20th, 2005

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  • Derfuhrer
    July 23, 2005
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    Hella-Sweet!

    Well that was just sweet. I loved it. Really. It makes me feel much better than I did a few moments ago. Oh, and I love you too Samantha!!!

  • Invisible2YourLove
    July 22, 2005
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    very inspiring

    this is very sweet ......im soooooo happy for both of you.....you finnally found somebody that truley makes you happy and i hope you guys wil be together for a long time......i love ya gurl ......great poem


  • dead soul
    July 21, 2005
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    awwwww manna thats so sweet. you better not break his heart i told him the same thing!!!lol but yea when you get your butt over here today we will talk bout something.but yea good write.love ya....Gina


  • mesmerize me
    July 21, 2005
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    awww this is sweet..reminds me of someone...but one can't dwell on the past........anyway great poem i am happy that you are happy again.Love you.
    -Ashley

  • Somebodys Hero
    July 21, 2005
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    hey sammie this is Susan Jewells real sister you kno biologically the mature one lol but i like this poem you must really like bobby well good luck with that and cya l8ter
    LOVE *Sissy*

  • Sweet 669
    July 20, 2005
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    i liked this one a lot..keep it up!..gooood write...
    *katlyn*

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