Kneeling; like the moon's
soft reflective gaze
bathing Master's face
Within the moment
the day has fallen away
to just mere seconds
Cool sweat dripping from
freshly marked, reddened skin
to dance pleasure's waltz
Large transclucent pools
of compassion, grace and love
gently touch my face
Limber arms and legs
snap to rigid attention
with one quiet word
Melodies of pain
strike the heart with emotions
while the body waits
Author notes
First attempt at anything resembling a Haiku. I'm still studying the form to know exactly what it should be other than the 5-7-5. Any feedback would be appreciated.
Written July 20th, 2005
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