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not finished

living up high
where the world if fine
up in the sky
having such a good time

partys everyday
living it short and fast
not here to stay
because we know it wont last

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Written July 20th, 2005

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  • Jules1
    July 20, 2005
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    hehe

    hehe hi al lol i love it so far and sorry for ditracting you! lol. hehe i bet ur not expecting this comment lol. i hope we av fun 2nite in X. its gonna rock! loves ya bi xxx