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A true friend

the day we met he was quiet and so shy
getting to know him now hes a great guy
never worries about his self,just others
he doesnt like you to feel that he smothers
a real true friend you will find in this guy
lucky for that friend,makes you wanna to sigh
always there to listen when your sometimes sad
you having him as a friend always makes you glad
so much laughter we give,almost feels like a sin
something friends do tho,is make each other grin



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Written July 19th, 2005

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  • Eyecberg
    August 7, 2005
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    Three (?) thumbs up!

    It is very important to have a friend or friends such as you describe Angel. Not only do they make you laugh but while a friend listens to what you say a friend like this listens to what you mean. Lucky you to have a friend such as this.

  • angeledtweety
    August 3, 2005
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    thanks star..always great to have a great friend tho thats where i draw the line i refuse to share..lol...thanks


  • Starshine on me
    August 3, 2005
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    great stuff !! keep it up.
    Starshine

  • angeledtweety
    July 22, 2005
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    thank you Jenna im glad you liked it ..thanks for reading


  • jezz-aussi
    July 21, 2005
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    Aww this is so cute and sweet! I agree, that is a true friend.

    Love and light,

    Jenna

  • angeledtweety
    July 21, 2005
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    yes i agree kris..laughter is such a releaseof stress and to have a friend u can be sad and happy with is such a great thing..thanks for reading


  • mariposa1978
    July 21, 2005
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    aww this is such a sweet poem angeledtweety! its always nice to have friends like these. great poem!
    Edited on Jul 21, 2:22 p.m. because 'happy fingers'.

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