Under a Celtic moon that crowns
my pelvic tree of flesh,
its trunk encapsulated,
by the crescents of her bends,
like howling wolves who swim
in tides of passion, we both mesh,
my limbs spread,
to receive her light form,
wet, and silky fresh.
She is a pale orb balanced
on my point, and floating free
she rises, and she falls
as her flesh grasps, and pulls at me,
where she ends I begin,
where I begin,
is up her end,
joined now in lovers postures,
that were formed
by two as friends.
I've washed across her
nooks, and crannies
while nibbling at her cookie,
with lips and tongue expressing
all the joys of oral nookie,
and when she crossed the chasms
of orgasms, then she took me.
Her face is beaming at the
silhouettes our bodies cast,
her mind it starts reflecting on
the pleasures from the past,
her hair it tickles me,
and weaves a pattern on my chest,
within her sacred chamber,
I fill her offerings, truly blessed.
Then soon her steaming vapors
heat the sap within my root,
and as she rides, in frantic slides
into her womb I shoot,
while spasms of her quivering flesh,
leave us breathless, but not mute
our sighs and cries ascend to heavens
echoed off the moon,
then I lie wrapped within her valleys
breathing sweet perfumes.
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Author notes
Written July 19th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Make my passion soar..... by Celticmoon.
350 points, ended August 10, 2005, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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images of stark shadows against a moonlit sky, the velvety softness of an ebony sky......the darkening of the shadow above and below, the flushing of passions root.
a grip of the pink pages, releasing, no not yet... lick, hmm..swirl..a gentle flick, pages deepening in hues as I'm reading more of you
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sinfully senual
I sit hot, sweaty and a lil flush
Your words have stirred an orgasmic rush
The thought of us melding into mush
Has caused my chamber to slightly gush
Leaving me speechless and with a blush
Left me see if I can get past this speechlessness to leave a comment.....LOL
My dear I once wondered where you found your inspiration for your erotica.......Now you have amazed me with your words once again. You have left me more than damp and with a reddened face, not to mention very hot!
You have truly meshed together all I was looking for in this piece. The sensual aspect is perfect! You tantilized all my senses from start to finish. You made it sweet yet extremely hot. Completely alluring form the first word to the last. You have amazed me once again with your creative talent for sensual erotica that truly grabs the attention of your readers.
Also, using my nick in your title and your write was a cute touch....I am truly flattered.
And BTW.......I'm keeping a copy of this write.... Hope you don't mind.
Thank you for making want a cold shower.....lol
celticmoon
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... your words do so leave one breathless don't they? small grin... moonlight and wanton lust what a weaving..
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Who said the solar system had to be boring eh?
Very nice. I love the subtle phrases you form. It so innocent, but oh so naughty!
Things must be orbiting in the solar system, I feel it getting warmer.
♥ Kimberly
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