My Dearest Love,
I write this letter,
this poem to you now,
for I do not believe that I can voice my thoughts.
This paper and pen have become my refuge,
my hope,
and my dream that you can believe that what I say is true.
You are my lover,
in mind, body, and soul.
In these past days that I have not seen you,
I have felt as if I have died.
My body lies here, preforming it's daily rituals,
but my mind wanders to that beautiful body,
your wonderful and delightful mind.
I can't believe now that it has been over a month,
I have seen the moon come and go,
but I haven't seen you.
Why the Gods have forced this torture upon me,
I have no clue.
But hope to see you soon,
to have you at my side.
My dearest,
hear my plea,
and see my love...
Come back to me, my lover...
Oh how I miss you so...
Your love,
Mairin.
Author notes
"Forever and always in my heart..."
I'd say this was really just option 2....THis is about my love with my boyfriend, and yet we don't have much time to see each other anymore...So I wrote this to him..
A contest entry
- Options For Love by lesbian-in-love.
475 points, ended October 30, 2007, 25 entries
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Very well written. It is hard I can understand not being able to spen ever minute with someone. My gf is in a different state then I am and well it just kills me. So I believe I can't relate to this piece. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Lovely
Oh sister, you are going to make me cry! T_T I love this poem, although I don't know why I haven't seen this one yet before...Did you write this, post it, but never feel like sharing with anyone but the internet? T_T
Anyways, I wouldn't change anything on it if I were you!
((Trying to 'follow' those little suggestions that they put at the botton of the review box :-D))
~Your loving sis~
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Very nice! I really like this! You can feel the emotions just pouring off the screen. Great job! Thank you for entering my contest.
Much love,
fancy pants
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excellent
wow this made me cry it was very beautiful excellent job you wrote this very well keep up the good work and good luck in the contest I really enjoyed reading this -
Very beautifuil. I nearly cried. This brings to mind a lover lost...Someone in the pits of despair..
Great job
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