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He used to call me his sweet girl
The love of his life
His dream come true
His sweet girl, his heaven on earth

He used to call me the bitter bitch
The hatred burns
His dream torn apart
His bitter bitch, his hell on earth

Now he calls me his bittersweet love
I'm bitter
But sweet
And well, he still loves me

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Not a true story! LOL!
Written July 19th, 2005

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  • xXxbecca10o8o7xXx
    July 26, 2005
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    this is a really good poem i think it's kute and i liked it alot


  • July 19, 2005
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    very good!

    hahaha very cute. and touching. its a relationship that can make through all of life's challenges. good job!!!!!!! <3333