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Unveiling the Truth

When it's time,
Time to face the truth,
time to face the facts,
You run, run away,
hoping what they said.
Is true.

But when you look at me,
straight into my eyes as I
force you to,
no matter how hard you try,
you know you can't fight the truth.
(Especially when it is staring)
Straight at you!

But now, I'm through.
Through with all this shit
you forced me into.
(You fight) Fight.
(You loose) Loose.
And now, I begin to wonder
If you'll ever just...
(Give up)

I'm fighting the uphill battle,
But I won't back down,
no, not now.
I've got an army right behind me,
And you've reached the top,
but trust me, what goes up,
(Must come down)
And you've denied gravity for
far too long.

(repeat 2x)

I am no slave.
I am no slave.
I am no slave.

So what now?
Where have you got to run?
What are you going to do,
when you loose everything
that you think is important to you?

repeat chorus.

Author notes

I wrote this a while back, actually, I just never got around to posting it. <3 o.O I want a better name. But that's all I can come up with. -.-
<.< Hah. Hah. Take that you profanity sensors.
Written July 19th, 2005

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  • ChicaneryInc
    January 26, 2006
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    Thanks, Dena! ^^ I'm glad you liked it.


  • Dena62265
    January 18, 2006
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    Hey! this was really cool. I loved the flow of words. I feel like I have been here before. Great write Dena


  • JasmineMarie
    September 24, 2005
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    Awesome

  • ChicaneryInc
    July 26, 2005
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    ...You can do that?


  • into your eyes
    July 25, 2005
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    ah, i see. i hate the bunny thing too. but, if you couldnt tell, i hate astrics or any other replacements just as well. you should change your settings where your words wont be censored.

  • ChicaneryInc
    July 25, 2005
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    I sensored it so the word "bunny" wouldn't appear. o.O I'd rather have astrics than have that appear. I didn't do it to make others happy...I did it so I wouldn't have to deal with that. That would annoy me *HATES the Bunny thing* ^_^; But, I'm glad you enjoyed the piece.

  • into your eyes
    July 24, 2005
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    Wow, I honestly enjoyed this read.

    But, I wanted to stangle you when I saw this line "Through with all this s***." Seriously... why would you EVER censor your work? This is your writing, you don't have to censor yourself for anyone. Thats f****** bull**** and it's so d*** pathetic. (see what i mean?)

    When you write, say what you feel, don't edit your words to make others happy.

  • ChicaneryInc
    July 19, 2005
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    << Because I just found it tonight and I wanted to edit it, however never really got into the mood to edit it. -shrug-


  • I Hope You Choke
    July 19, 2005
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    How about "Fighting Truth" or "The Battle of Truth" or something. Very good-- why didnt you post it sooner?

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