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Wonder

And Wonder flew like a dream
Out of the door in a rush
Leaving a trail of tears—a stream
Of sadness silenced in hush.
Chords of melody and song
Guide Wonder with all’s time
At one’s side all along,
Whilst the mighty royal dine
On fine flesh of many brothers.
Then they toast for blood;
Toasting in honor of Wonder
Who’s feasting on flesh’s love

Author notes

Just something I was trying. I think it sucks.
Written July 19th, 2005

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