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Shes gone now

knowing our connie for all these years
seeing her leave us brings on the tears
in so much pain that she had to Indure
thinking for her its a blessing im sure
i'll always be happy the memories so dear
things we shared the laughter the tears
wondering why she was taken she was so sweet
shes happy now the family above she will meet
want you to know someday it will be our turn
for now i will keep you close in your small urn

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my close and dearest friend
Written July 19th, 2005

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  • Eyecberg
    August 9, 2005
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    Makes me think back on the people that I have lost, all family so far. No I take that back one friend half a life time ago. I just lost my Grandma the day before Christmas '04, she was 93, kind of wish she was here.

  • angeledtweety
    August 3, 2005
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    thanks star there is a lot of pain for as close as we were..hasnt been but 3 weeks now..writing the poem and doing a book of memories has meant a lot..just something i can keep to keep her close..its hard for any death i know but knowing her 31 yrs is like most my life..i will always miss her..
    Edited on Aug 03, 10:07 p.m. because ''.


  • Starshine on me
    August 3, 2005
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    This is a wonderful tribute to your friend!!
    I really could feel your pain and loss.
    Great writing!
    Starshine

  • angeledtweety
    July 19, 2005
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    ty for your comment msjcto6..glad you liked it..its always hard losing someone.for my friend was somewhat easier knowing she wont hurt anymore

  • msjct06
    July 19, 2005
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    wow this reminds me of how i felt when my daddy died and still do...he was so wonderful but he went away and yeah...nice write! good job!

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