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Just Let Me Go

Can't you see, that I am no longer here, when it's me, I've started to disappear.  Don't you know, I've fallen this time, please let me go, before I'm pushed further behind. I'm on the ground, beggin you, to not make a sound, when you find out what's true.

"Close your eyes", that's all I can say, please don't cry, when I've gone away.  Don't wait for me, I could catch up, don't watch me bleed, if you know I've had enough.  Don't tell me things, I know are fake, what it brings, to a chain I won't break.

Just let me go.

I don't want your love, I don't want you to care, I've had enough, knowin you weren't there.  I don't want your pain, I don't want your life, it's a game, where everyone cries.

Just let me go.

Find out the true meaning, that you thought "love" really had, found out why I'm screaming, when things continue to go bad.  Find out this time, Why I continue to cry, and when you see that I'm behind, you know I just want to die.

"Don't give in", is that all you can tell me, give me a reason why I should trust anyone again, because all they do is turn their backs and leave.  Go ahead and put me down, do you think I really care, it's everytime I turn around, I see you standing there.

Just let me go.

Just let me go.

............... you wouldn't understand, what I was about to tell you, you told me to look within, that you would pull me through.
............... I lost the trust I thought I had, so I turn my friends away, and now everything that makes me mad, I leave them without anything else to say.
............... I'm sorry that I did that now, I finally learned the lies, I'll fall to my knees onto the ground, and this time I'll try not to cry.
............... I've held it back, I can't do this anymore, please tell me where I am at, before there is more blood in my floor.

Just let me go.

I promise now I won't hurt you again, I promise that I won't give in, I'll promise to you I won't hurt myself, even through this pain I felt.

Just let me go.

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Written July 19th, 2005

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  • XSmearedBlackInkX
    July 20, 2005
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    Ahhh that was so sad and full of emotion!! I loved it but i'm hoping everything is ok with you and you really don't feel this way. Beautiful write