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Today were together
Tomorrow we will be apart
no matter how hard we try we both wide up having a broken heart

I am starting to give up
I'm loosing confidence
i don't have a clue what to do

I'm asking you to talk to me
So maybe it will help
I really want to make this work

I love you i really do
I want you by my side
I don't want you to go
So please call me
and please don't let me go

I need to know that you want this to

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Written July 19th, 2005

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  • cayleyxox
    September 4, 2005
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    awe this is a really sad and deep poem, i know the feeling. you have lots of talent keep it up

  • -Kortnie-
    July 19, 2005
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    Thank you i will do that to.

    _kortnie_

  • foreverbroken
    July 19, 2005
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    awww i feel ur pain i am in the same situation


  • miseryzcompany
    July 19, 2005
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    wow..its great.. but try to use the spell check hun..it helps..im a horrific speller..so i no..it works wonders.but the poem is truly amazing..