Fascination, enthralled by you
Nobody else for me will do
An out of the world sensation
Enthralled by you, fascination
Your luscious kiss, your warm embrace
Keeps me in a state of grace
Yes I really know what bliss is
Your warm embrace, your luscious kiss
In years of gold, still young at heart
Forlorn whenever we're apart
More love story to be told
Still young at heart in years of gold
Enthralled by you, fascination
Reason for my jubilation
Forever joyful never blue
Fascination,enthralled by you.
Author notes
Option 1
Written July 19th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Many Options Come Enter !!!!!!!! by Darc Soul.
300 points, ended March 11, 2006, 34 entries
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600 points, ended December 21, 2006, 14 entries
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Hmm....
I have a hard tme with poems like this. One, I asked for no "whored" entries and this is in 6 other contest! That makes me think "no place to put it or no place it has won?" Two, I stated "I love pic inspired pieces.
I also think love is for suckers and sex should be violent/passionate/dirty." This is very sweet, but not my taste.
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I am simply FASCINATED by your poem, and that you have written in the form amazingly. Your emotion, down pact. I have now fallen in love with a new form!
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hehe i like. good luck
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First of all, thank you for entering my contest. I really appreciate it, and I wish you the best!
this was an amazing piece! I loved it. the flow was wonderful, and it was all over awesome!
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Its a very interesting form you have used here geat rhyming good flow
Good luck in the contest -
Thank you for entering my contest
I loved the reverse quatrain it was very interesting and a great technique
This is an amazing poem filled with emotion and the rhyme and rythme are great too!
~With Love and Encouragement in everything that you do~ Twizlerboy -
Wow what an ace poem. It rhymes beautifully and doesn't sound forced and is so fulled with emotion-it's gorgeous. Nice write sweetie and good luck in my contest x Also thanx a million for going by all my rules x
Luv Lou
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very cool, i love the idea that you have for this poem, love the style, keep up the good work and never ever stop writing. also please feel free to visit my page and comment on what ever it is that you like.
tanya -
Excellent!
This is a wonderful poem! I love the way it is set up (reversing the first and last lines). -
cool write.. i sort of liked the repeating lines of it.. its a different kind of style. coolness. good luck with the contest!
peace
carolyn -
The poem is great and has great imagination. Your words are sensational and keep writing. Good Luck in the contest, Rick
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