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Together

When you finally saw me in the same light
The one I held you in for so long
I was happy.

When you finally looked me in the eye,
A smile gracing your lips as you leaned in to me.
I was happy.

When you kissed me goodnight on the hand
After the only date we've been on
I was happy.

When your call at 2 AM woke me
And the words wafted quietly through my phone and into my mind
I was happy.

When you held me after all the fighting
And we pretended the world had fallen away
I was happy.

I can still feel the butterflies
I still smile when I fall asleep
I'm still happy.

Everything so far has fallen apart.
Let's sit around and wait
For things to fall together.

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Written July 19th, 2005

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  • Eusebius
    December 26, 2005
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    Bravo!

    A wonderful and poignant poem, nicely crafted to achieve the marvelous effect. Bravo!

  • brokenwing11
    July 20, 2005
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    i like it ang. it's sweet. i feel a tear coming to my eye...lol. awesome. love ya!

    ~jessi