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The Gift

The pain, did speak
 Can Icure the weak?
  Mind said you need his grace,
  Ilooked in to His face
  The eyes did say
   I need to pray
  Lo. the gift was given,
  As I had no pain.

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Written July 19th, 2005

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  • emscritic
    July 29, 2005
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    ditto ankuraa
    its really the only way to deal with pain sometimes.

  • ankuraa
    July 19, 2005
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    Mom! Lovely
    But... Repair the colour scheme plz!


  • loved-up
    July 19, 2005
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    Good write. I don't tend to like spiritual poems , however this was well written and not preaching like many others. I like the rhyme scheme and the shortness of this poem as it makes it both effective and easy to read xxx