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Lost In The Darkness

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Grains of sand in an hour glass
slipping through the threshold of time
struggling slightly beneath the surface
a battle between reason and rhyme

My mind is left in a state of confusion
good and evil are at odds once more
who shall be victorious in the end
temptation has slid in the back door

When you  go and dance with the devil
know you will get burnt for sure
the devil will devour your soul
take away all that is good and pure

The crossroads in my mind confuse me
my direction to travel is not very clear
unsure I begin to search the unknown
pushing forward  with all my fear

Today begins fading into yesterday
blurring what might have been
I see a light at the end of the tunnel
waiting for a new dawn to begin


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Written July 18th, 2005

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  • Sandygram silver member
    July 19, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you so much Josh for the wonderful comment. You always encourage me writing my poetry. I am so happy you are my AP son. God Bless you for always being there when no one else is around. Take care, AP Mom

  • josh-13
    July 19, 2005
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    The crossroads in my mind confuse me
    my direction to travel is not very clear
    unsure I begin to search the unknown
    pushing forward with all my fears

    I love the imagery in this one. You did an awesome job writing this. One thing though, pushing forward with all my fears, Hey We are not a creation of fear. What fear really is

    False
    Expectations
    Apearing
    Real

    Thats fear. Stay strong and rember, Everything works out for good for those who love God. As for the poem, It was an amazing write, with powerful emotions. I loved it.