I searched for you from here to there
But could not find you anywhere
Was ready to give up, it's true
From here to there I searched for you
On one fine day to my surprise
There you were before my eyes
Lighting my life in your gay way
To my surprise on one fine day
Many a year together we
Years of joy, years of ecstasy
Replete with memories quite dear
Together we many a year
With love still strong now near life's end
Soon to Heaven we will ascend
Forever to sing our love song
Now near life's end with love still strong.
Author notes
Title .You.
Written July 18th, 2005
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A contest entry
- I Love You Because... by ---FrumanEsque---.
303 points, ended May 28, 2006, 9 entries
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What did you think
Comments
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i love it!!! its amazing!
its kind of positive which i really like i enjoyed reading it!
good take in the prompt aswell!
thanks for entering my contest and good luck! -
This is a very unique peo. I like it because it truly utilizes poetic device. I've never read anything like this before and I like the style.
A poem that seems to signify a spiritual search. Great write.
Thanks for entering, and good luck in the contest.
BC. -
This is a beautiful love poem, I loved the feeling the ending gave me...wonderful writing and a form I enjoyed that I have never read before, good luck in the contest. ~sugar~
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A beautiful love poem...the form is so splendid!
Thank you so much for the entry!!!
Az -
This is a wonderful poem.. and I am glad you
brought it to my contest.
Best of luck to you with it.
Riftkin
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Beautiful.
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Wonderful write. Great job.
~Oka/KC -
This poem is very good, but to be honest just is not what I am looking for
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This is very sweet and a great
thought for this contest!
Good luck to you with it here!
Jeremy0826 -
This is a lovely joyful write here full of love... I just found the simplicity yet the true nature of it quite beautiful and breath taking. Also love the form you have chosen to use.
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sweet, sincere, and so well penned! thank you for entering my contest!
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aww
I wish my love will be like the one discribed in this..
that feeling of "forever" that I think every couple hopes for, you captured it beautifully! -
sweet
very nicely done i enjoyed it. you are a nice writer. thanks for entering in my contest its been a blessing. Good luck! *god bless* ~kelc -
amazing!!!
"On one fine day to my surprise
There you were before my eyes
Lighting my life in your gay way
To my surprise on one fine day"
Aww that's sooo sweet!!! I love it!!! Keep up the great work, good luck, and thanks so much for entering my contest!!!
xoxo
emily♥ -
very nice! great job.
-Meleah -
very good
Thank you for entering my contest. I enjoyed reading this very much.
Keep up the good work.
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Congratulations!
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First of all, that has to be the most interesting rhyme scheme I've seen. Secondly, I really like how you worded this poem. I like how at the beginning, it seemed like there was no chance, but by the end you were in love and complete. Great job. Thanks so much for entering!
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WOW
This is amazing Billbard, I love it, it's so sweet and the rhyming has worked wonderfully, keep up the fabulous work. Thanks for entering and good luck.
Happy Valentine's Day
best wishes as always
Moonstone Virgo
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Very nice and sweet/ Thanks for entering and good luck!
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This is truly delightful - It is obvious from your poetry, short or long, that you have a very loving relationship. I hope you and yours have many years together yet.
I must have a try at this style sometime.
Cheers
Anne -
Outstanding, as always
Yet another freakin' awesome masterpeice from the wonderful world of Billbard.
Keep up the great work!
Holly
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