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Birthday of love

Day after day
the year
is gone.
Just another one...
Was it for good?
Was it for bad?
Nobody knows...
Somewhere somebody
was born.
Somewhere somebody
has died.
What is peace
for one
was war
for another.
Year after year
the life
survives.
Why?
Because every day
of every year
we celebrate
the birthday
of love...


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Written July 18th, 2005

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  • jessicabuzz
    August 17
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    nice, loved it was soo clever and very well done.


  • ourgirlFriday
    November 3, 2008
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    wow.

    impressive


  • glitterydoom
    November 2, 2008

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    thankyou for entering the contest my freind made for me

    I really liked this.

    good luck


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    May 6, 2008
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    Thanks for coming to my party! This is a wonderful gift that I really appreciate. Thanks again!


  • DarkHunter
    April 22, 2008

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    Thank you for this entry. Yes each year, each minute we are alive is a blessing. Thank you for joining the party


  • Epilogue
    September 11, 2007

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    "Somewhere somebody
    was born.
    Somewhere somebody
    has died."
    These lines stuck out the most to me b/c it is like a synopsis for the whole poem. that life is bittersweet- though some live and some die all will be remembered and loved by some and forgotten or hated by others but life keeps on going and as we have been born sometime soon it will be our turn to die and usher in another life.
    thank you for your entry
    ~elizabeth~


  • LittleAnn
    December 4, 2006
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    This is very nice, thank you for entering my contest! I enjoyed reading this very good poem. It made me smile.
    Keep up the great work and lots of luck to you!
    *+~Annie~+*

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    September 18, 2006
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    This is wonderful, I love the imagery you create in my mind, thanks for entering into my contest, I wish you the very best of luck

    Karen


  • Rita Krocha
    September 18, 2006
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    My! Short lines....simply words doing the deed.M really moved.Everyday indeed calls for celebration.....You make everyone part of this one. Love it to bits!


  • silver bugs
    January 5, 2006
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    This is beautiful and thought provoking, lovely! Thanks for the great read and thank you for entering my contest.
    Sorry for taking so long to judge my contest, my internet has been giving me some problems. Good luck

    ~Lana


  • dp robertson
    October 30, 2005
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    not bad but no

    david


  • Rj
    September 21, 2005
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    This is a lovely sentiment, often forgotten in day to day struggles. Will try to keep it in mind as long as my feeble old mind can. Lovely write.

    Peace,

    ~RJ~


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    July 21, 2005
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    This is beautiful. Thank you for entering and writing something that shows that each and every day is a celebration for someone somewhere... it's very true
    With love
    Shari


  • kkatie55
    July 18, 2005
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    Excellent

    I loved it all ...it didn't leave anyone out...it made me feel loved

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