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When I....

When I looked into your eyes
I used to see only me
But now I see a shadow of lies
And no longer me I see

When I looked into your heart
I could feel mine beat in time
But now I see it's broken apart
And it feels like a crime

I don't know where all the years have gone
Nor anymore do I know my place
But every dark night fades unto dawn
And the tears stain my face

But if the truth you ever learn
If you could and would truly see
If you could feel my soul burn
You don't know what you mean to me

Author notes

.............uh... huh....
let me know... cuz this is kinda weird...
Written July 18th, 2005

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