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Blast

ON THAT BLACK SUNDAY
WHEN
- The City Of Destiny Is Still
     Dosing in its Sunday sleep

- The Steel City children are still
                 Flying in their colour filled dreams of week-end

- The Sun raising lazily over the Dolphin’s nose still    
     Un-decided on his attacking strategy

- The winged soldiers are in their nests, still
     Stretching their wings for crusading over the green city.

THEN CAME THE BIG BANG -

- That awoke the city aghast
    And alas! Gave permanent sleep to scores;

- That shattered the line between
     Dream and reality;

- That made Sun hide its face behind the
    Columns of smoke and roaring fire balls;

- That made the high-fliers squat on the burnt logs
    Once their sweet homes.

WHOM TO BLAME? THE LORD OR THE MAN?


ON THE H.P.C.L. BLAST ON 14.10.1997 IN VISAKHAPATNAM

Author notes

THIS IS A PLACE IN INDIA WHERE A BLAST IN A GAS PIPE LINE OCCURRED.
Written July 18th, 2005

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  • July 25, 2005
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    Yup...no artwork lol. I would really like the see the artwork especially when the poem is excellent. Personally...I believe man is responsible for his own actions, although I also dont believe in god so maybe that's why I really love the poem but I cant judge this if I dont have the artwork. IM me when you have it.


  • aslanlight
    July 18, 2005
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    Certainly not the Lord!!! A fantastic poem but where's your artwork?