water's rippling
nature streaming desirous
flowing emotions~
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Written December 19th, 2002
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WOW! This is so nice! I absolutely love the picture you choose some very good ones!!
Beautiful write I enjoy reading your stuff!
~Kayla
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I felt very serene...also beautiful picture syncs with the words...
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Great!
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excellent
lovely and very symbolic to me. There really isnt too much to say on a single haiku..this is great the way it is, but if you wanted to go more in depth you could make it multiple haikus..great job,
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OMG, fantastix is so right about 'The Sound of Music' thing. I love that movie! I love haikus. I have a couple, but they're not that great. This kinda reminds me of the days I use to go fishing at some lake with my mother and my brother. I use to lay on some really big rock and listen to the stream flow over the rocks. I love that natural music. Nice write. :o)
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;) I could never get the hang of haikus. One of the best I've read on this site...you have such a way with words to make anything seem so peacful.
-Nicole -
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The serenity in this reminds me of when Julie Andrews skips rocks in the opening of 'The Sound Of Music'. Beautiful write. :)
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Mmmm nice and so peaceful. :) -
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SWEET SIS AND THE FLOW MUST GO ON.
YOU OF COURSE, SEND IT OFF WITH
A HOOP AND A HOWL. bUT IT IS REFRESHING TO
DRINK IN IT AS IT BREEZES BY. VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS
AND A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR.
MAY HEATLH GRACE, YOU, ME, AND ANYOTHERS, TERRIBLE SICK HERE
ON THIS SITE. FOR I KNOW OUR POETRY HELPS SOOTH THE SOUL AND
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Cooling refreshing -tj- -
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I could almost hear the sound of the water...very soothing ku, Sis! Loved it!
((Hugs))
Maureen -
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And those emotions are so natural...very nice haiku, Susan! The vast sea that is life is overflowing with hearts adrift~ -
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Beautiful haiku Susan,loved the imagery..love and hugs Janetxx -
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well, well, well...I get here just 5 hours late, and I already have to search forever to find the end of all these comments...how funny is that...well susan the picture is a beauty...a true inspiration to write about anyways...and the poem was elegant and graceful...well just like you...well put I applaud you ~~Jenn -
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Wonderful haiku, Susan - such tranquility ... Loved it. Hugs, Myra -
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Again, wonderful poem. Thanx so much for your kind comment on my haiku.
Take Care
:D
Di -
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I looooove the way this flows from word to word... tis hos a haiku should read... Beautiful! -
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So let your love flow
like a mountain stream...
Beautiful thoughts to enrich my heart, Susan. -
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Well done Susan you did this correct and its nice hon.......
Going back to bed soon, just on read your poems and check mail.
Hugs,Sherry -
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I love well written haiku...this is beautiful...so very serene and calm...Hugs...Ro -
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so calming. beautiful.
carly -
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Perfect form and structure. I enjoyed reading this poem.
:D
Di -
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Very lovely. The flow is like a magical waterfall. Beautiful. ~Amy~ -
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Very fluid write. Love the way it flows like trickling water.
Hugs and Blessings, Daoine
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