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My Butt Hurts

my butt hurts,
it hurts really bad.
i think this chair,
is going really flat!

Am I that fat?
i have a bar under my butt,
it's asleep,
i'll bet everyone is going to hate this poem,

i'm getting my point across,
I want to sit in the comfy chair,
but no, BROOKE TOOK IT!!!
i'm sorry if i bother y'all...

i'll end this now,
and go lay down,
i can't feel my butt,
but i know it hurts....

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i wrote this in 2004 also
Written May 25th, 2004

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