i keep tryin to look past
this messed up life of mine
but every time i do it
the past is all i find
i try to put it all behind
but it never goes way
i keep on makin the same mistakes
same ol shit, just a different day
now i'm tryin to move on
and i'm tryin to be strong
i've been at it for so long
that none of it seems wrong
messed up kid my whole life
no one else can see my strife
wavering all these years
cuz nothin else can calm my fears
don't even know where i'm goin with this rhyme
it's just somethin to pass the time
wanna put this to the tune in my head
too damn bad my guitar is dead
Author notes
so...it started out as a song, but i couldn't get the right chords to go with it. it sounded too country, so i just said fuck it.
Written July 17th, 2005
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I really enjoyed this peice. great job, keep up the good work.
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Hell yea!!! This is an EXECELLENT piece of work you have here.I know how you feel about not being able to let the past go.It always comes back to haunt you, or me, anyways.You have some really good work and I wish I could see a lot more of it.But when you do post something up on here, it's kickass.This is a really really really really really really GREAT poem and I can't wait to see more, buddy.... -
Awesome write, I loved it, this could make a good song, I liked it a lot, nice job.
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Wow just keep your head up hight and never dought yourself ok good jod keep up the good work
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