Mother Nature's spirit
Flying above the stars
I wonder what she's thinking
When she sees this world of ours
Does she see all the destruct ions
Of her earth's beautiful scene
Does she notice how our people
Are cutting down her trees
Do you think she hears her creatures
Crying in the rain
Because they have no shelter
And many, suffer in pain
Does she see her rivers polluted
So her fishes cannot swim
I wonder what she's thinking
While she's taking this all in
Does she see all the fighting
That is happening in the streets
I bet when she is flying
Mother Nature weeps
She weeps for all the beauty
Of the land she so adored
That men are slowly destroying
Until earth will be no more
Author notes
Written July 17th, 2005
A contest entry
- Invitation only - do not enter unless invited. Thank you. Spirit of Flight Overload by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended July 18, 2005, 1 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wonderful
This is incredible so true and sad i love it and you and your writings love always wordpainter -
Very well done Bertie....I love the message in it and the way the rhyming flowed so easily. Great job! ~Bud~
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Hun,
Would you please indulge me in clicking the "remove from contest link" on this piece and then re-entering it as a prewirte in the contest located here allpoetry.com/contest/1397288
I would appreciate it greatly. Thank you. Gypsy -
Absolutely love the way you've went with your thoughts here. Truly shows you were inspired by the pic and not just writing about it only. A solid piece and a fantastic message as well. I must say this impresses me and of course approaches a subject dear to me, nature and the preservation of it. Excellent piece! Blessings, Gypsy
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