I spread my wings
and I know I can fly
up through the clouds
or on a mountaintop high.
I fly with the eagles
we shine through the sun
I finally feel free
as a new day has begun.
So spread out your wings
and come fly with me
there is no limit
to what we can see
no problems, no worries
as we fly through the sky
destinations unknown
just tell your fears goodbye.
Just close your eyes
and come dream with me
to unknown places
that only we can see
We will fly with the eagles
we will shine through the sun
and finally be free
a new day has begun.
Author notes
Written July 17th, 2005
A contest entry
- Contest - Closes at 8pm EST -- Spirit Flight - Amaze me! by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended July 18, 2005, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This was such a heart warming write! Very well written, and truly beautiful! Nice work!
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Definately beautiful and has a sense of peace about it. The only problem I found with it was both time you used the line
"a new day has begun" It really disrupted your smooth flow of the piece. Perhaps "a new day's begun" would have been a better flow there. Overall quite lovely. Blessings, Gypsy -
Thank you for your comment - it was an interesting painting to write about, and as in poetry - art is read differently to many people. I appreciate your compliment.
Thanks - baileysgrammy
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this is very nicely done with great imagary and a subtle message in it nice job
love and light
blaze -
Thanks for your comment! I really appreciate it & am glad you enjoyed it.
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wow this is fantastic
i love this alot
good luck in the contest
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