I shall breathe you in
savour your nectar of heart
and never exhale~
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Written December 19th, 2002
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beautiful and right on the mark! wonderful romantic imagry, well done!
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Yes I wish for this. To breath him in and
loose myself within his arms. To be whole
again. I understand this kind of passion.
Loved it.
Daoine -
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most of the poems work and the visuals they create and beautiful. But with this one I got the image of someone kissing another person and turning blue in the face from not wanting to exhale. It made me giggle. I guess thats what I get for taking something to literally. LOL. :) -
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Wouldn't it be great to just fall into someone special just for that moment ...when you kiss. -
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this is so beautiful, and heartfelt, i really liked it:)
good job:)
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wow.. jsut wow... I could never manage to make three lines sound so beautiful.. *sigh* makes me miss my boyfriend though... but good poem! :) -
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Excellent Susan just lovely is this your style now think you have a great start hon......Hugs,Sherry -
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Gorgeous!!! This is a very nice poem indeed. A merry christmas to you, hope all your dreams and wishes come true in the year to come. -
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This poem is amazing!
Please visit me soon...
Take Care
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Di -
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So powerful and sensual. It takes my breath away. Love it.
Hugs and Blessings, Daoine -
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me too Susan im with jenn on this...beautiful as always
hugs
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umm, well, wow...ok, I will look like a fool to say anything else...wow...you are such a talented person...you amaze me everytime ~~Jenn -
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That is what kissin' is for! Sensual sensitive Susan ... Splendid! Myra -
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OH MY GODDESS!!! This is heart achingly lovely...I love Senryu anway and this is such a perfect example...wow...this goes into my favorite RIGHT away...hugs and thanks for posting this...Rowan -
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ahhh this is SO beautiful! *sigh* -
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Susan, this is absolutely lovely, almost yummy. You expressed so much in so few words. Such a poetic genius are you. *hugs* ~Amy~ -
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Sigh...now this makes me want to go and disturb my husband in the middle of playing guitar. ;)
Red -
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Beautiful senryu, Susan! :-)
Love Ya,
Maureen -
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WOW... makes me think of this afternoon with my hubby (blush).
This conveys a mature passion. I love it. Another favorite. -
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Lovely little piece Susan -tj-
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