Can you just imagine
A vampire crying tears
Drops before the morn
sliding down translucent cheeks
eyes dark, forlorn~
As they sadly hang their head
droplets of blood a spilling
showing anguish,and great remorse
for all the nights they went killing~
as they howl loudly in despair
over evil they had done
recalling deeds quite selfishly
no thoughts of anyone~
could it be
in the darkened night
they hide a heart in pain
mourning in solitude
for a life
now beyond reclaim?
or maybe...
it's a warning call
to those who get so near
as they reach out to grasp the soul
then draws it oh so near~
if there should sound
woes in the night
a pull within your core
I think it best to search for light
a good precaution for~
We all know by now and sigh
that Vampires never cry~
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Written December 19th, 2002
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*sigh* what a wonderfully written piece, my goodness you never cease to amaze me with your very unique perceptions on everything, entertaining the very idea of vampires crying is nothing that even crossed my mind. I'm glad this was written, it was very inspirational, very powerful.
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Or do they cry? This poems really makes me think and wonder... I love it. This one so far is my favorite although I love all the ones I have read so far.
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Your title is wronge you are mis lead.
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Susan...this
was an amazing write! The picture... WOW! Don't know where you found it...but really great!
The idea of vampire tears... so interesting.Do those who have lost their souls realize it...and do they care....and are they capable of feeling enough pain to cause those tears?
I enjoyed this one...
Hugs...
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Awesome
Awesome sweetie~ I love reading your vampire writes~ Keeps me mesmerized
~ Keep them coming for I look forward to more~ The imagery left me with that question~ Do vampires cry~ I can honestly say from this end~ I have seen it but that could have been a mirage 
~ Big hugs 
and much love~ Desire 
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A fantastic write. I enjoyed reading it. Of course i'm a vampire fanatic. Who would of guessed eh? lol.. anyways. Keep up the great work!
~Somber -
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ooooh hon, this one gave me chills... so beautifully worded... well penned :o)
huge hugs,
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Mmm, I love Vampyres. The word sounds sexy to me... Oh, hey. Was I speaking out loud? My bad. I really love this poem. I'm lost for words... sorry. Great write! :o)
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absoluteley incredible, imagery, flow, rhyme, meter, intensity, all beautifully executed. This has become one of my favorites. the picture also adds a nice precedent for the text, which is, i will say again, absolutely incredible -
excellent
Mmm i do so love a nice sexy vampire chomping on my neck..lol not sure i would want him to cry though..might shatter the illusion..lol
Nice one Susan..
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Great use of words. A very good poem.
~Raven -
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This has a very nice flow. The words seem to wend and weave themselves into one. But perhaps a vampire would cry for the loss of light in his life~ -
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Love Vampire writes and this one will be added.
Excellent piece.
Thank you for sharing.
Rodney -
excellent
Wonderful imagery! I absolutely love this poem... :) -
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I love it. It's very beguiling and dark. Draws the reader in like a moth to a flame. Ouch..lol.
Blessings, Daoine -
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Very interesting idea for a poem...does a vampire ever regret the lives he destroys...NO! Really liked this, Sis...Very well done!
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excellent
wow. this was just amazing.
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This one really gets me thinking, Susan... what a profound idea. I love vampire movies BTW. This is not your usual stuff. I like the raw edge to it. -
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oh by the way...I SOOO LOVE that picture ~~Jenn -
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ok ok, this reminded me of the show angel...but he is a vampire with a soul (and one of my fav shows) this had some extreme imagery...wow...what an amazing write susan...brilliant..wonderful..ok ok, I can go on and on and on...but that wouldnt leave much for anybody else to comment..he he...bravo! ~~Jenn -
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This is brilliant. The picture and poem go hand in hand and compliment eachother well. A spectacular poem. I much enjoyed it.
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Oddly sad and haunting at the same time. Liked this one much -tj- -
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I love vampire poems and stories...this is really thought provoking in its way...Great images...I liked the fourth stanza the best...but the entire poem is great...hugs...Romhain -
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hey thats my imaginary boyfriend in that pic how did you find him?? lol
you have quite an imagination Susan...vampires??
cool write hun
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excellent
I love your poem i think u did a great job
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Wow...very cool! I absolutely loved this. The picture adds great imagery too. Wonderful write. Keep up the great work!
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