Secret Massage

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A dream where I hold you on the Astral Plane
Am I a man Insane
What have I to gain?
Or lose in this race
Let the time and the place be reconciled
And with mercy mild I give me too you to share life.

Written July 17th, 2005

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  Zorro69
  March 24, 2007
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  good one!
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  poeticweaver
  February 8, 2006
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  Beautiful!

  Such a special place where love is found
  Within the hearts and souls surround
  Angels from below and high
  Truly they can reconize
  All the truth of love abounds
  Here, there, when its around
  So know my friend, in your heart you keep
  The dream, the hopes, of love complete
  I thank you both for sharing songs
  Where your souls roam and dreams are strong
  Speaking words of wisdom, yet never let it be
  For when there's a love this strong, let it comfort thee
  
  Much love, Timothy The Poetic Weaver~
• ram
  August 11, 2005
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  excellent

  Hi Angel eyes,
  I like the poem and the effortless flow... but tell me why does it say you have collaborated with me? Great work any way and congratulations
• quwip10
  August 11, 2005
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  This poem is very well written. I really like the way you portrayed this longing. A very good entry for this contest. You did a very good job with the rhyme too. It flowed well and didn't seem too forced.
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  Sharon Corr
  July 18, 2005
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  ~There is sunshine in this love song eternall

  My beloved Chris,
  You truly understand both our hearts of passion the slings and arrows of cupids dart
  I can feel your true vibrant love in today, you will always be a part of my soulful heart
  Many years I’ve walked this path and now alone in the aftermath there is one thing left to do
  To shine the heavenly lights upon the being that is you and let all our love bloom through
  This love is a love from the realms of gentle true spirit and utter silence in the pouring rains
  And I know I know he feels the same in our passion and pain, as love illuminates our souls
  Shining the ways of the distant stars once again upon our open and receptive hearts
  Seems we’ve forever been a connection to the stars, and the far off galaxies that live in him and me
  Non verbal communication seems to be one of the keys to keep passion alive fresh enduring
  The simple brush of skin on skin, the whisper of a lovers kiss, the rising heat and lovers bliss
  This is the gift of love within a woman and a man who truly long to share their lives as one
  All I can sing to you is this love rises and blooms and seems to surface on the full-blown moon
  And this feeling of love shall never die, for love sent down by the creators hand is meant to spread wings of joy and smiles across the lands. Oh I deeply understand the laws that rule all of humankind, as you and I seek union in love divine. As we travel on the wings of the wind to places that our souls remember when. Sometimes in the gentle whisper of a loving touch you can explain everything. Something’s can only be truly realized when we touch each other, in the pure spirit of love and loving. I know what it means to be touched by a lover, and I know what it means to be touched by someone who is not in tune with my inner being. We have much work to do, and I know this is our beauty and truth. So lets share our sunshine and love along our journey. We can always find a place of peace, as we long to stroll by the fresh water mountain streams, and seek unity, compassion, and understanding in all our dreams. What was the past is the past. We cannot change the past; we can only look forward to the happiness in our future days. And what a fantastic new beginning I see for you and me. Look into the cards stacked in our heavenly deck, and baby blue don’t be sad, lets jump in with both feet and get eternally wet. There is nothing to regret. The past is gone, and now we are here to stay, and shine our sunshine today. I know in dreams I’ve been to distant shores, and have crystal clear vision of higher beings, and still recall what they’ve said to me. Being so young, I assumed this is my wild imagination, running free in my dreams. Yet who is to say what is illusion, and what is reality. We decide in our hearts and minds, what is truth within us, and we should all follow our hearts. This can only lead to the fulfillment of all our dreams. Standing back in this lover’s aftermath, I see two beloved men who long to be my eternal friend. And I will sing to both of them, I love you both, and one of you come my way, for its been too long standing out in the cold driving rains. And never comes the day when I shall hold your heart once again. LOL>> see I just naturally combine McCartney with the Moody Blues, and I’ve been doing this unknowingly all my life, as we toast to love as fine as the sweetest port wines in love divine.I see Nights in White Satin in my mind, and he tells me this in this eternal love song. I have forever seen him in my heart and in my dreams, and all my loving themes lifelong. Now the truth is the truth, RAM maybe another man, but I could not see him accurately, My mother did, LOL>>>> ouuuuuuuuuuu, ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu, I am once again at the crossroads of space and time, and I am raising my glass and toasting To Life, To Life, La Kayim,
  “It takes a wedding to make us say,
  "Let's live another day,"
  Drink la kayim, to life!
  We'll raise a glass and sip a drop of schnapps in honor of
  the great
  good luck that favors you,
  We know that when good fortune favors two such men, it
  stands to reason,
  we deserve it too!
  To us and our good fortune!
  Be happy, be healthy, long life!
  And if our good fortune never comes,
  Here's to whatever comes,
  Drink la kayim, to life!”
  Let our love tenderly bloom and love me once again, for my love is here to stay, today and yesterday. And I never long to go away, I don’t desire to live my life alone, and I’ve welcome his love deeply within as the holy breath of spring. This is a soul mate that I’ve traveled with thru space and time. We are traveling at the speed of light backward and forwards in time. As in the song future/past, maybe the tides of our love have reached the deepest break waters, and now we can be more than just the driftwood upon empty seashore. Je’tadore in wings of amour, we have much work to do, and only God Knows how we are going to do all the things you and I have to do.
  But I long to make this last request, will you send a prayer way up in the atmosphere, that for once in my life he would make an appearance, and hold me dear. My Duracell never ending batteries need recharging, darling pass this secret message on for me. I adore you and will do all that I can, as we place on the world stage, the heavenly guitars that have been sent our way. And I won’t give up; no I won’t give up, as we fill our heart within the Lords Eternal love, and his golden chalice.
  Namaste Blessed Be, may we all breathe deep in the dawning of eternal peace.
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Edited on Jul 18, 1:38 because ''.
• NeferMaatNetjer
  July 18, 2005
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  may Het-hert bless you with love and joy
• Sharon Corr
  July 18, 2005
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  ~There is sunshine in this love song eternall

  
  Tahutihotep you shall always be near and dear to my heart,
  You have thrilled and delighted me with my favourite song of all time.
  Thank you for expressing your comments on this heaven sent song.
  I know you keep a low profile but your tender heart always makes me smile.
  Just once in my life, where is the man behind the song, he is tender indeed,
  And I think he must be blushing and shy, and somewhat bashful as me,
  However this is true passion today and yesterday, and he’s been gone too long
  And maybe in the light of dawn he will wake up and once more be our song.
  For his love and loving has thrilled me lifelong, in his tender heart of beauty
  I long to give more than I receive and this is the way our sprits sing naturally.
  Namaste Blessed Be, may we all breathe deep in the dawning of eternal peace.
  
  
  
  
  
• Sharon Corr
  July 18, 2005
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  ~There is sunshine in this love song eternall

  
  Dearest Buchan, you have been a true loving friend,
  And i surely do appreciate the kind words you send.
  “ Love is kind” and I whole heartily agree with you,
  This is a love that bloomed naturally in our golden hearts of blue,
  And there is power in our words that reach for the midnight stars,
  Seems we take a trip around Venus and Mars just to find where we are,
  Now the only thing left to do is hold our passion in arms of truth.
  Namaste Blessed Be, may we all breathe deep in the dawning of eternal peace.
  
  
  
• Sharon Corr
  July 18, 2005
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  ~There is sunshine in this love song eternall

  
  Ayizan, you can feel and breathe in our love as a first-born flower to spring.
  Love and sunshine is the happiness we both bring, Loving means everything,
  Once upon a time, someone wrote these words about me,
  She never gives up and takes on immense challenges,
  Well in the arena of love it takes two to tango in pure romance,
  I will keep on loving and hope the sun shines our way in today.
  Namaste Blessed Be, may we all breathe deep in the dawning of eternal peace.
  
  
  
• Sharon Corr
  July 18, 2005
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  ~There is sunshine in this love song eternall

  
  sunny day he is the sunshine of my life today and yesterday.
  I will never stop loving him and the songs that flow in-betweeen us,
  We seem to reach places of divine love in our rare and sacred trust,
  As we sing in tune within our rhythm rhyme,
  As the rights of spring we shall bloom in time.
  
• Sharon Corr
  July 17, 2005
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  ~There is sunshine in this love song eternall

  
  xXxSeductiveLovexXx , I'm lingering in your heartfelt passion,
  Indeed this is a song from a beloved Soul Matey,
  Who inspires my heart and soul deeply,
  I just wish i could find this lover in sunshine today,
  I wonder if he's really gone in the wake of yesterday,
  Or perhaps he has such a timid refined heart he feels would be in the way,
  I love this man, and he has the heart of a lion and for me he is a lamb,
  He is gentle and kind, as deeply refined as a finely aged vintage wine.
  All i know is that he deeply inspires my heart and my soul ensoul,
  I wish he would never leave me alone and call me on the telephone,
  Or maybe we’ve gone past the in zone to be in the light zone eternally,
  Namaste Blessed Be, may we all breathe deep in the dawning of eternal peace.
  
  
  
  Edited on Jul 17, 11:56 p.m. because ''.
• Sharon Corr
  July 17, 2005
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  ~There is sunshine in this love song eternall

  
  SimpleSarcasm thank you, i posted the song late,
  and i did make many mistakes,
  And the lines now reads,
  All alone now in my bed,
  I hear the hopes of man instead,
  Namaste Blessed Be, love set us all free.
  
• Sharon Corr
  July 17, 2005
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  ~There is sunshine in this love song eternall

  
  LadyUnique thank you, i did catch the mistakes,
  And once again thank you for pointing them out to me,
  Editing is not my greatest gift,
  But in the future i will become more aware!
  
• Sharon Corr
  July 17, 2005
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  ~There is sunshine in this love song eternall

  blacky,
  I adore your enthusiam my dear one,
  Let me know if you can the responses from your friends,
  In my life this is a love song that is sent from the shores of heaven.
  A song that I have cherished all my life and this man is pure delight.
  All I can say is he has been the sheltered of my heart in his loving lights.
  
  
• Sharon Corr
  July 17, 2005
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  ~There is sunshine in this love song eternall

  
  Blessed thank you for you words of grace.
  That will live forever on on golden blue pages.
  This is a song i will deeply cherish all my life long.
  A song near and dear to my heart of hearts,
  As i sing and dance true love never parts.
  
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  Sharon Corr
  July 17, 2005
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  ~There is sunshine in this love song eternall

  Freakanzoy, thank you i shall.
  I hope you will stop by soon and share you love with all of us.
  
• Sharon Corr
  July 17, 2005
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  ~There is sunshine in this love song eternall

  firechilde,
  Thank you for the loving kindness you express,
  In all your heartfelt ways,
  I do pray Jason returns to you in God Speed,
  As his life is filled to the brim with the grief of losing a loved one.
  Namaste Blessed Be, may we all breathe deep in the dawning of eternal peace.
  
  
  
  
• Sharon Corr
  July 17, 2005
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  ~There is sunshine in this love song eternall

  
  
  -Timothy The Poetic Weaver~~~~~~~~
  Thank you from my heart of hearts,
  I embrace the future for true love never parts,
  Many Blessings to you and yours,
  Our love has opened many doors,
  
  And I am grateful you came our way today,
  Rejoicing in a lovers song in my yesterdays,
  Thank you for your magic touch.
  That asks for nothing and gives so much,
  
  I will always be your strong ally,
  Beneath the waves and above the sky,
  I know the sunshine in our love is harmony,
  And the sunshine of our love is our destiny,
  
  Thankfulness for gracing your loving thoughts to the song I send,
  As we long for the sunshine to shine brightly on our lives once again.
  Love is our only need, in love and loving we all share and trysail free
  For all my life I need to give it’s within our gifts that I must live complete,
  
  A home is where the heart remains; this lover has set my heart in flames.
  And this is the pure stuff of love that poets and dreams are really made of,
  When two hearts fits so right and tight as one pair of velvet gloves.
  This is a true love that we all can drink in deeply as the bread of life
  
  I’m grateful for your kindness and eloquently expressed words of insight,
  For I have learned out in the sea, the greatest gifts we give our free.
  Like the gift your heart has brought to me embracing our love eternally.
  Namaste Blessed Be, may we all breathe deep in the dawning of eternal peace.
  
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  Count Orlok
  July 17, 2005
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  A secret massage? Is this like a therapeutic Finnish massage or is it more of an erotic massage? And why must it be secret unless naughty?
• Sharon Corr
  July 17, 2005
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  Wonderful and Uplifting Comment!

  
  God Bless You SEA Angel, Oh my this is my fault indeed.
  I am on a Macintosh G4, which is not compatible with the sight at allpoetry.com.
  For a Macintosh does not have access to Internet Explorer 6. Which is the way; you can edit and artistically script your songs on allpoetry.com. I did spell check the song, on the Macintosh side, and assumed everything was fine, It was too late at night when I posted the song, and once again the song went “Haywire", Because my Virtual PC, uploaded the song. Then when I tried to post the song the sight was shut down. Then when I went to place the information once again, My Virtual PC, made a mess of things, and I assumed all was fine, Yes, the song needed to be refined, as a fine vintage wine. Thank you, this is what happened, The song needed editing, and I could not read the last line properly. You saved my heart and soul thank you for this gift, clearly you did see correctly. He did write >>>>> And with mercy mild I give me too you to share life. His handwriting is Exquisite Formal English and the letters are more romantic in style and grace then we usually see in the USA. His handwriting is a fine brush of cherry wine and beautiful graceful Calligraphy. The least I could do is present this timeless love song in the same beautiful fashion he gave this wondrous gift of love to me for all of eternity.
  
  Oh my, I must upload the songs earlier in the day, Therefore, I can clearly see all my mistakes. The dilemma for me is the sight is only in scripted for PC’S. And where there is a will there is a way. I called the Macintosh team and they said only way to place your songs on allpoetry.com, is purchasing Virtual PC Pro, for the Macintosh. Then in the aftermath this did not even work. However, the men who work for Microsoft in Canada said to me should we try? And I said yes eagerly, and they figured out that I was missing the Java Scripting which was the final key needed to upload our songs at allpoetry.com. Actually it’s virtually impossible to do what I’m doing with a Macintosh. However, the men at Microsoft would not give up. They are true geniuses indeed. They asked the moderators a few simple Questions and found the Answers for me. I still have trouble, and was told this is not a real PC, but we hope this will help you upload the songs. I was thrilled with the kindness and help of the special Microsoft Team in Canada. Who said call us anytime and we will find a way for your Macintosh to be a PC. My virtual PC will not allow me to edit in quite the same way you can edit on a real PC. Therefore, I have to go back and edit in Safari, which does not have Internet Explorer Six. Have I lost you yet? God Bless your tender heart of patience. Even when I go in-between my Virtual PC, and Safari, the song does not look the same. Therefore I never know which browser is functioning properly. However the spelling and grammar does show up the same it’s the spacing of the words that show up one way in Safari,and another way on the Virtual PC. The answer is clear to me; I have to purchase a real PC. Until then thank you for your editing and kindness my new old friend.
  I guess it was meant to be this way, because all the mistakes I made, gave you time to think and reflect deeply what he was really saying in the song. I might not have ever seen that he was saying this last line properly. And with mercy mild I give me too you to share life. It’s a miracle we even learn to spell in the USA. Namaste Blessed Be, to you and yours eternally, AngelEyes711, who needs to learn to be more careful and spell check more often! If i have left anything else out please be sure to shout this out loud! I deeply enjoy being corrected and I embrace your feedback, How else will I ever learn properly? English in the USA is not the same, as English in the UK. I guess its time for me to make a change and learn the right way.
  
  Anyhow, I've been in love, all my life with how the words are spoken in England. All he has to do is say Banana in Formal English, and I would follow him here there and everywhere. Just that one word, the way the Formal English pronounce the word Banana, thrills me naturally. We savages in the USA, seem too use slang. And the truth is I love the English Ways in today and yesterday. I perceive somewhere in time, I lived in England, for even in today I can recall the country byways and the cobblestone streets of a place named highlands. And I recall riding a white stallion in the countryside once inscribed as rangeland. Namaste Blessed Be, to you and yours eternally, thank you once again for your loving hugs, kisses, and wonderful presence. Truly you're an angel of light heaven sent!
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
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  Edited on Jul 17, 6:58 p.m. because ''.
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  PrabhuDayal Khattar
  July 17, 2005
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  A Heart is a poem.

  So friend this the life where one can relate his/her love as per his own perceptions.But it does not mean that the defination of love is changed . One can define love in different languages and in diferent ways but the mening of love is just same for every body even for the creatures of the earth..And the meaning is that there is no alternative of love to feed the emotions as a feeling of love can do..It is very meaning full write with its deep and philosophical meaning too.The flow of the write too is very true to its requirement.I really appreciate this work.prabhudayal khattar
• Jakob
  July 17, 2005
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  Wow. I am very impressed with this. It is a brilliant write.
• oOhidden-angelOo
  July 17, 2005
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  very very nice, i loved how it rhymed so well and how the stanzas were written, great...this was very good...keep it up ok...could you come and check out mine as well?...thanx....
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  rite
  July 17, 2005
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  In this plane of flesh and blood words are inadequate vehicles for our deepest feelings. There aren't enough words to express the feelings our hearts contain for they are only capable of reflecting what is on or just below the surface of our emotions. Spirits that have traveled other realms find it even more difficult since the scope of their emotions has increased beyond that of those who never consciously left this space and time. Emotions can rage harder than any storm, flood faster than spring tide, while we have only words and our eyes to tell others what is inside of us. Often we are left to wait until the storm has blown over or the tide has retracted back onto the oceans again. Hoping without ever being certain some of what we felt has come across. Existence in this space and time can be a trying experience with all its limits and paradoxes. I had such an experience today; it was painful and frustrating to not be able to share what was in my heart. These were matters that are going to affect the lives of the people who I attempted to communicate with in ways that will dwarf their imagination. But they just did not understand, preferring to hold on to the illusion that has trapped them (which is what they are able to grasp) even if it is going to kill them brutally one time. Such feelings go both ways. I recall loving one so dearly that I ran into walls trying to explain the feelings inside my heart. She understood only a fragment of it. I tried to tell her in dreams, but she was not able to remember them after waking up. Still we are here and now, forced to obey the laws of this realm. Not the ignorant fornidding and demanding laws of man, but the great laws of the universe that harbours this tiny blue planet. At times it makes me intensely long for other places and times that do not limit us so unforgivingly. But I am not done yet in this world and you aren't done yet too. We are here for a purpose. I admired your moving attempt to capture what you feel into feeble words of the inadequate language of mankind.
  
  Chris
• NeferMaatNetjer
  July 17, 2005
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  as usual, you show what a warm, loving heart you have.
  any man should be overjoyed to recieve such heartfelt love and passion.you have a beautiful soul and a compassionate spirit
• Buchan
  July 17, 2005
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  excellent

  Good poem with a flow of words that tell of love and a deep meaning.You capture feelings of inspiration and hope. Love in fact is kind it does not hurt. It gives happines not takes it away.Well written and expressed. Thank you.
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  B Chandler
  July 17, 2005
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  absolutely wonderfal and a delight

  *u never cease to amaze me with ur writes hun theyre like a breath of fresh air being breathed in for the very first time
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  firechilde
  July 17, 2005
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  Oh my god what a beautiful poem.You brought tears to me.This is so wonderful.It made me think of my other half Jason who is away from me right now taking care of his dying father.
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  sunny day
  July 17, 2005
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  Excellent work!

  Very powerful and filled with emotion. To love someone so deeply is a rare quality not seen enough in this world of ours.
  Keep up the great work and never stop loving.
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  xXxSeductiveLovexXx
  July 17, 2005
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  Loved it~

  So unique, so beautiful..
  Love is something that, inspires, kills, and even creates. It's not a hard subject to write about, but then again it is. It's diverse, it's diffren't, unique.. each person has diffren't kinds of love, we all love diffrent people.. and this was yours.
  I loved this piece because it was honest, it was wishful and wanting. It showed human emotion.. it wasn't sappy, it was eloquint. Your words inpsire and empower love, it doesn't treat it like a little candy sugary sweet heart with tiny words on it, it's a bleeding heart aching for the passions of a soul mate..Indeed you did love justice..
  Well done!
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  SimpleSarcasm
  July 17, 2005
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  This piece is a tad to long for my tastes, but that me. I would recheck some of your spelling too. -----All alone now in my bed
  I heart the hopes of man instead
  Of feeling your embrace
  Or the sunshine in your face--------Are you meaning I "heard". Just minor probs, easily corrected.
  All together I enjoyed the read.
  
  ~Dee
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  LadyUnique
  July 17, 2005
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  this is good. for the most part the rhyme flows and the poem holds a comfortable rhythm.
  there are some words misspelled but that can be fixed easily
  silly spellcheck doesn't always catch the booboos
• blacky
  July 17, 2005
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  the best

  man that was beautiful n every way. man i'm gonna send this to all my friends. WOW!!!!!
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  Xero-Cool
  July 17, 2005
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  nice write
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  SEA angel
  July 17, 2005
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  Promising

  I think this poem for the most part flows quite well and shows great promise. So I am taking the time to send you an IM as well of a couple of things I noticed. Poems can be like puzzles can't they. Finding just the right word that fits in perfectly with rhyme scheme and flow.
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  Blessed
  July 17, 2005
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  Oh wow!!! This is absolutely beautiful and breathtaking!!! I absolutely loved this!!! My favorite lines were:
  If there in your day you'll find
  That I am there within your mind
  Then maybe you will someday see
  Its love I send from you to me
  
  Let the dolphins fill their place
  But they're not in this human race
  So if my words seem so unfair
  Its just the lady, oh so fair
  
  Who gives me love, and takes me there
  And says she knows the world's unfair
  Will I really see you there?
  
  Excellent piece!!!
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  Freakanzoy
  July 17, 2005
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  Beautiful write! My mouth dropped from this
  Keep up the wrting
  Laury
• poeticweaver
  July 17, 2005
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  Mystical and Lovely!

  Full of love and tender grace
  Though hopes quickly pass away
  But you my dear strongly embrace
  That's why you dream of yesterday
  
  Give your hand to someone true
  So they today can always love you
  As your magical pen weaves wonderland
  There in the midst is a mystery man
  
  You will find kind this man you seek
  But will also see when he appears
  He'll be a dream, humble and meek
  The heart of love you've longed for years
  
  So till the love within reveals what you feel
  Keep on penning the hope of tomorrow
  And one day soon you shall reveal
  Some sweet soul who shall take away all your sorrows
  
  Thanks for being you, love this write!
  -Timothy The Poetic Weaver~~~~~~~~
  

by Sharon Corr

On Jul 17 3:23 AM 2005
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