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Resurfacing Love

Darkness call is the night
Thru the shadows
I move
Searching
For the voice
Of my love
Lost long ago
Before his time
Gone forever
Yet never to part
Back in my arms
Til morning comes
Day breaks
You disappear
Withering back
Into the safe haven
Of the darkness
Only to blossom
Within my arms
Once again
As the moon
Takes to
The indigo sky
True love
Resurfacing
Night after night
For all eternity

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Written July 16th, 2005

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  • artis
    July 18, 2005
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    imagination is a vast land where even the vanished can once again come and pay sweet respect to long lost lovers, very nicely writ....Artis

  • mellymo15
    July 16, 2005
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    wow. this is very good. it has a nice ring to it.
    Darkness call is the night
    this is a very good line. i really like how it sounds. i like the structure of it too.