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I'll never forget

I wake up days and nights
Knowing that i've lost the one i love
Knowing you'll never be in my sights again

I wake up days and nights
Knowing my heart is broken
And your heart rests in peace

I'll never forget the last time i saw you
And the last time i held you
I thought this moment would last forever
Was i wrong?

I belive in love beyond the grave
But as for love rests for me
Awaiting for my love again

My love roams around
Trying to mead
Hoping to see you again
I know we'll meat again
But when?
Is it tomorrow?
Is it years from now?

I cry knowing i never got to say goodbye
Lifes not the same knowing your gone
Sense you've been gone the world has changed

I bit my tongue
Trying not to speak up
Awaiting for the day i've longed
For our love again
Knowing that in your arms
I'll be safe again

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Written July 16th, 2005

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  • trouble15
    July 16, 2005
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    good job

    great job, it is really good, and seems to speak for many, i really liked it, hope u check out some of my work if u get the chance

  • da little poet7
    July 16, 2005
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    i like this. it's kind of cliche-ish but hey many ppl have the same exact feelings. they just don't know it yet. but comment on some of my work when you get the chance.