Forever lost
In your emotions
Love, hate, fear, anger, hope
Feeling helpless, worthless
Not knowing where to turn
To get any kind of love or care
Forever lost
In the selfish world of man
No-one ever willing to share
Wanting all they can get
Not caring who they crush
On their way to success
Forever lost
In the conflicts that arise
Families never working together
Never caring what they are doing
Not worrying about the hurt
That they are causing
Forever lost
In friendships
So called friends turn their backs
Only returning when they need help
Asking what's up but not
Listening to the response
Forever lost
In relationships
Knowing he thinks and cares about you
Not feeling worthy of such love
Needing that shoulder to cry on
but knowing there's people stopping you
Stopping you see
The only one who understands you
The only one who will be there whatever
The only one who will protect you forever in his arms
Author notes
Written July 16th, 2005
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Wow.
That's so right. Get these people outta my way!
I really really like how this goes through all the different people.. family, friends.. some of the time I feel the same way, but then my friends are there to fall back on when I realise i'm alone without them kind of thing so its an endless cycle of trying to stop being lost... wow im rambling big time. Well basically yeah this is a good poem and i really like the message/can relate x -
unfourtunatly there is a lot of truth in this poem, good job, I liked it
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Basically, lost forever in the everyday life of a cruel world. This is what the person in your poem is going through if i'm not mistaken. Very nicely done.
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wow sad but totally awesome piece dude, you've put all ways of being lost realy well. strong piece, keep up the good work! x
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Great poem, sad but true...anyway keep up the good work!
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Wow awesome write..wow you are definitly one of my favorites xD *Amanda
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EXCELLENT
Well written, i really enjoyed reading this poem!! -
Very emotional and well written. A nice read.
Good luck in the contest.
~whispered
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forever awsome
yes the poem IS very true and sad.sometimes i feel the world is like that -
I like this poem a lot.. It's very true.. Anyways.. good luck and thanks for entering
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I must agree. This is well thought out. You did an excellent job on this. The feeling and emotion in this just stand out so well. The pace of it works really well as you just shift from one idea to the next and it all fits together seamlessly. Very nice piece of work.
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outstanding write. very interesting and thought-provoking. very well laid-out and organized, and it flowed very nicely. the simple style of it was very effective. great write overall. take care, and keep writing.
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awww! this is so true, dats the shit life throws at us! ps.always ere 4 u!
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this was really good you could feel it nice flow and i love the colors on the page and i hope u do well in you sontest good luck
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Oh.. I really like this, it was very good. it shows your talent really well, it flowed nicely, over all it was a really good poem. Any ways good job, and keep writing.
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Love It
this is a very meaningful poem that you've written here
I agree with everyone here such a deep feelings and emotional perspective towards reality AWsome write lol!
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i rele like this poem its very deep and discribes all the factors and problems of life keep writing xx
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I really like this poem. It pretty much describes the mood I'm in at the moment, especially the stanza about friends. You know it's a good poem when it really hits home for someone.
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OOOOO emotional! I like it, keep writing sis! you have a way with words! love ya!
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not really my style of poetry...but I won't say anything bad about just because we have different styles of writing...I see you have fans of your work so that is good..keep writing and inspiring ~Rush
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This is the sad truth and reality sucks but enough for that because this poem is great and very honest with a straight forward kick in the teeth - very uniuqe and I realy like your style awsome job keep it up...
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i love this poem sad but sadly true
i can see your very talented i look forward to reading more of your poetry great write -
Love It
such a heart break poem hon
I agree with every lines that you've written it's life and reality that we have to face every singl eday I'm afraid and no this poem is not good it's Wonderfully written hon keep on writing and I'm proud of ya love ya much mom
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I´m sorry you feel that way. I´m sure things will get better... It may take a while, but they will eeventually, you´ll see.
You did a very good job with this poem. I loved the words you used. Congratulations!!!
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