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Never

You're gonna find your dream come true
the girl you've always dreamed about,
soon after, she'll fall in love with you,
and you'll know without a doubt...

you'll know for sure sometime later,
she'll be the one, that fills the void,
in her eyes you'll see your future,
and the love you wont avoid...

You'll want to spend your every day with her,
and she'll be worth it in your eyes,
you'll find all you've been looking for,
and never hear the lies...

When you meet the girl,
who's made for you,
and completes your soul,
don't tell me... about it..

i felt All that towards you,
and you still walked away,
and nothing i could say or do
could keep you close to stay...

When you find that girl,
please don't tell me,
my heart will all unfurl,
and i will never again be free...

You were the boy who completed me,
all I wanted was to be near you,
I never felt so happy,
please don't tell me....

When you find the girl, The Lucky One,
I don't wanna know,
'cause then i'll need somone to cry on,
and i may never...
ever know...
never... ever love...    
again

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'Lafcadio', i commented on 'the masterpiece' by nike
Written September 21st, 2005

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  • shadowhex
    July 18, 2005
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    hi, great poem! good luck in the contest!!!
    -shadowhex

  • Prowl Cat
    July 16, 2005
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    aw that so sad...but very nicely done! Something like thta happened to me.

  • HalfWayAngel
    July 16, 2005
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    Aww that was so powerful I so fealt the angst here. And I feel for you girlfriend. I hope your heart heals soon hunney. I'll give you my shoulder to cry on when ever you want to vent just drop me a line, I'm here for you!
    Halfway