(she sighs)
you don't know what its like
to live your life worrying about
your mom , and the possibility of
her getting wheel chair.
do u know what i had for breakfast?
i had my mom's tears for breakfast
this morning. it isn't a good way to start
my day.
you don't know what its like to have a
stupid sister who thinks that money is the
only thing that matters. and all she does is
put pressure on her mom to get money.
she thinks that the only way her mom can love
her depends on how much money her mom sends her
a week. even though she has a good for nothing
husband, she still exploits her mom.
no, you don't know what its like.
( she cries)
i cant handle this anymore,
i don't care about my college money,
i told my mom to use it for her
chiropractor, because all that matters
to me is my happiness, as well as my moms,
i want her to be okay, and i now know she
will be...
no, you don't know what its like....
but now you have an idea.
Author notes
this piece is a very personal piece, its true, my mom, has a chance of getting a wheelchair, and i couldnt let that happen, so i told her to use my money for college...i dont care though, cuz i know she will be ok now, umm, i dont wat else i can say, but this is more like a journal entry, that i needed to share cuz i couldnt hold it in anymore, so go ahead and comment as u please.
Written July 16th, 2005
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thankx
thank u very much, and yea, i know my sister has problem, its the distance that keeps me from kicking her butt..
..but umm yea my mom means the world to me and i jus about would give anything for her to be ok, and see her smile on her face...
much luv
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awww sweetie
your sister needs serious words with, and im glad you're mum is going to be ok..you're such a sweetie looking after her like that...shes lucky to have you. nice piece and i understand its personnal...all of mine are. nice write, l8az love ya sky xxxx
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wow juana great poem i still trying to get my moms friends so they can help u kno that anything you need you can count on me ill always be there when you need me you can always count on me and all your friends you know that kay so if anything u jus give me a call rememder that kay
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hey juana wow great write full of emotion and hurt.i really wish i could do something to help but what ?? i dont know what i can do but what i do want you to know is that im always here for you ok whether is that first kiss to anything stupid im always here to listen and help you out!!!!i really hope and wish things work out and i know they will because with a heart like yours full of faith anything is possible....love you lotts cat!!!!!*smile* -
Great write. This is full of emotions. I cried it really touched me. I wish I could say that i understand but i dont because i havent been in a situation like that. All I can say is i hope things get better for you. Reach for the stars. Much luv, Shanna
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SORRY
Oh how awful! I didn't know things had become this complicated.
I'm so sorry, sweetheart. 
s for you and Will too. If you guys ever need somebody to talk to, you know where to find me. God bless! Love Brian
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Good
I like the fact that it is personal. This poem is good because it is real. It is your way to rant and rave about your life.
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