there is a image in the back of my head
it will always be there till I'm dead
the image is about being abused
i remember everything he used.
it start slowly only happening once or twice a month
then it started happening day by day
i wanted to die to stop it
in the end i start to feel sick.
he touched my private area all the time
and said it always going to be fine
he forced me to suck his dick
and afterwards i was violently sick.
when i used to fight back
all i got was a hard slap
he would pin me to the floor
or stand against the bedroom door.
i know wonder if it was my fault it happened
but my mates tell me he will get what he deserves
i now stand with the blade wanting to end the pain
but i cant because it will make his day.
justice will served in the end
til that day i Will face the pain
Author notes
*crimson tears
Written July 16th, 2005
A contest entry
- My Beaten Soul by PoisonxXx.
301 points, ended August 13, 2005, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poems about tragedy by Serenity-words.
750 points, ended March 26, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great Job thanks for entering.
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things that r bad always can haunt but we always get through things and u r a strong individual
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dang, im sorry to hear about that, that really sucks ass. i've never personally been abused, but i guess everyone says its easy for me to put myself in other ppls shoes, to escape my own mind and become someone else, which is what i did in the two poems i entered (i hope you enjoy them). i'm so to hear about it, i am, and i hope things get better for you. the rhyming and flow was dead on, and the words worked perfectly enough to the point where i could invison what was going on. great write.
~LiL Woody -
Ouch. So much raw emotion trapped within the words. Pain, plain and simple. I know the feeling, I would guess...not once, but on two seperate occasions. I applaud the way you've put it in words. Very well done.
~Whispered~ -
I too were abused as a young child. I know how it is. It is so good to see you dealing with it. Just keep in mind that one day, you will be able to grow from that event, and stand tall, and without a doubt, you will be able to tell yourself that it is in no way your fault. Great poem!!!
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Words can't express. Amazing
Hunni, I knew I have been told and I am so sorry for what happened to you. But look at you now babe, look how far you have come. You winbabe. -
wow! so much power and hate lays in every word. i understand how you feel and what you have to go throgh each day. like i tell you, keep your head up high and take each day at a time
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Sorry I thought I had, anyway another good piece of work on a differcult subject.
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oops i forgot an applause!
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This poem is so heart breaking. I am sorry to hear about your abuse, but I am gald your dealing with it (last line). You expressed your feelings with great passion, and i admire youfor it. Thak you for entering my contest, great job.
lots of love,
Megan -
This is a great poem. I wish you luck in the contest. Thank you so much for sharing your experience with me. You're a strong person. WITH LOTS OF LOV, (and a gift)
(a dozen roses for you) ALLY
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