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So let this be

So let this be,
with or without support

only us,
together, lying side by side,
holding hands throughout every ordeal

never leaving each other under any
circumstances

let this be,
when we begin with the
end in mind-
flee to each others arms and
never let go

let this be
let this be


and never shall we fade

Author notes


Written July 16th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • tragedienne
    July 1, 2006
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    A sweet and simple love poem. I really liked it. You capture the essence of love well - through the little things like holding hands we can see the big picture. Nicely done.

  • noir eclairage
    July 17, 2005
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    This is simple but AMAZING. i LOVE it! The repition of the line or phrase
    "let this be"
    was extremely effective. There's not too much to say except that this is a beautiful poem and I wish you the best of luck in this contest.
    ~noir ~

  • noel lovett
    July 16, 2005
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    lovely

    nice work man and good luck in this contest