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My Secret Love

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My Darling
You may never read this letter I write as you know not who I am
I hide behind a mask so I can express the feelings I have for you.
you love me with a passion just as deeply as I love you my love,
circumstances stop me from writing elsewhere, my Friends they
wouldn't understand, so I write private poems to you to read.
I need to release the feelings of love I have suppressed for so long,
to do that I must write here where I feel freer than I ever have before.
Do you remember the time we met? your face smiled back at me
from your page, I had to get to know you, you felt the same way too.
Only not as I am now, as I was and still am, then without the mask.
Can you understand, I must have this haven to escape to?
It is important to me.
Know that I love you with a passion I never knew existed within me,
you have brought feelings once dormant to the surface.
One day we will meet and it will be a perfect reunion between us,
we recently celebrated our first anniversay together, we sent each
other a card full of love, spent hours talking together.
One day my love I may tell you, until then it must be as it is for us
as we are not free to love openly, but we can go on loving each other
without the mask.
Yours until eternity.
Your sweetheart.

Author notes

# 3, but I guess could also be
# 1
This was inspired by a Friend who is going through this.

Written July 16th, 2005

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  • shubs
    September 4, 2005
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    Beautiful soothing hopeful resurgent words Jenni..so wonderfully done..and your thoughts echo from every corner of the treatise--Shubs


  • xtootiex
    July 18, 2005
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    aww this was really sweet. i was confused a little at some parts (maybe coz im still half asleep ) but this was really nice and a very hopeful poem. best of luck in the contest x x x


  • jenelda silver member
    July 17, 2005
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    AWWWWWWWW Vic, you make me smile..you actually applauded Yemms comment? you are a silly gilly, but a cute one
    Thanks for your wonderful comment, and I think..your applause
    seeya Jenni


  • eternalpoet
    July 17, 2005
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    oh.. dunno what i did.. was applauding yemmasee's comment..lol.. doenst make any differece .. silly gilly me me


  • eternalpoet
    July 17, 2005
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    oh thanks, luckily i read it.. it may help me ! nice comment.. !

  • eternalpoet
    July 17, 2005
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    3 Stars ***

    wow, love letters, ... i write too many of them, on behalf of my friend.. .. (thats what friends are for), well i just think that yemassee gave a perfect advice... really i wud rather applaud his/her comment... and then the speechlessness of nightwish.. just a perfect letter, though it full of truth, rather i cant see biterrness anywhere

    nice write dear.... good work.. give my regards to your friend..

    thanks for sharing

    hugs and kisses

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend........ just keep it up.......... your humble little friend.......... ........... ........... ........... - vic ( who else? )


  • Danny VooDoo
    July 17, 2005
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    aww this is an excellent letter full of hope and love made me smile , i'm in a net relationship with the most wonderful girl i have ever known we've been together 6 amazing months now and i'm looking forward to a lifetime together with her, i love Lauren very very deeply and to anybody who says net relationships are meaningless I say quite simply you're very wrong

    best of luck

    ~Danny


  • Mysteriouz
    July 16, 2005
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    awwww!!!!


  • Yemassee gold member
    July 16, 2005
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    I'm do the long distance thing right now and it isn't easy. Not that I find it hard, just sometimes frustrating. But your friend seems to have other pressures, like maybe people in his/her life that don't understand or believe in her relationahip. And that is to be expected. People don't see online relationships as real and I suppose they often aren't, yet when they are looked upon as odd. Well I heard on the news yesterday that some 40 million couples are currently on line couples, so I guess people need to take it more serious.

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