What happened back then, I don't believe is true, but what my adopted mother tells me, almost everything about you. Oh how I had a sister, yet she died at birth, yet Im still left here, as the ignorant baby girl.
So lost and blinded by tears, yet consumed in many fears, now look at what all you have done, you play more games, cuz you thought that they were fun. Is it worse enough I don't have my real parents, did you think anything about that, and how much I now hate you, once I learned you turned your back?
You think I really care this time, you think I give a damn about you, look at what the fuck you've done, and the pain you put me through. You threw me away, and you let my sister die, so you think I really care this time, I bet you didn't cry.
Im not even in your life, yet now I know so much, and when I get the words from you, you'll soon feel so out of touch.
You pretend to know that I'm not here,
now you can resist,
because now I guess to you,
I cease to even exist.
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I commented on Masterblaster's poem : Destiny's Child
Written July 15th, 2005
A contest entry
- Tell Me What You Feel by His Star17.
300 points, ended July 19, 2005, 18 entries
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This piece is quite honest. Thank you for entering my contest. This poem is sodden and overflowing with emotion. I liked it quite a lot. Good luck in the contest, and keep the great writing up. I'd love to read more from you, were I given the chance. but....Were I given the chance, would I want to start, knowing i'll forget something, not want to end it, keep rambling, and then get to the end to realize all i've said is a waste of time? --...erhm...--Sorry....rambling...
~X~Caitie -
great last line... this is dripping with emotion, Alyssa... i liked it.. quite an honest piece... sorry that you are so tormented.
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