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Your Imprisoning Me

over and over again we going around in circles,
you wont tell me,
she wont tell me,
he wont tell me,
tell me whats wrong,
what is going on.

you love, you love me not,
make up your mind
please tell what you want,
is it he,
or is it me
show me your way so i can see,
the path to your heart,
please set me free,
you are tearing me apart
my heart is open to you to see,
make up your mind or set me free

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Written July 15th, 2005

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  • Fortune
    August 21, 2005
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    something taht begins with blue monkey16 nice new name alex, how your holidays been
    luke


  • MissPumpkinKing
    July 29, 2005
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    awwwwwwwwwwwww goodluck hunny , really sweet poem.


  • silver bugs
    July 20, 2005
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    Hmmm...questions without answers. I think a lot of people can relate to this. You're a talented poet, I enjoyed reading this...Maybe I'll read some more sometime. Powerful, thought provoking write. Keep it up.
    ~Lana


  • Neon Highway
    July 15, 2005
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    hmmm love eh? Well.... I am very much putiing up wioth love atm.... but yours seems different. gd poem