Countless numbers, can you hold them on, countless time, in which I don't belong. Little worries, yet distant lives, but look between, fear in my eyes.
Say it's ok, atleast while I'm not here, look again, through bloody tears. Watch me leave, or fade away, listen closely, to what others might say.
Get that knife, the proof is on my wrist,
Slice my skin, yet I wonder why I did this.
Hide the pain, yea sometimes work,
Look at my friends, look at how they got hurt.
Should they bother, does it look like they really care, why am I so blind, when I know that they'll be there? Why am I so insecure, why am I so confused, why do I choose, to do the things I do?
What would happen next, if I did it one last time, but this time I mess up, and really fall behind?
Get that knife, the proof is on my wrist,
Slice my skin, yet I wonder why I did this.
Hide the pain, yea sometimes work,
Look at my friends, look at how they got hurt.
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I commented on TheDarknessIFeel's poem "Shadow"
Written July 15th, 2005
A contest entry
- Dark by xxxgothxpoetxxx.
300 points, ended July 26, 2005, 7 entries
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wow that is a poem i want to read over and over that is an awsome poem but what dose it matter if i like it is awsome the was a flawless poem i give u a A++++ keep up the awsome work ttyl
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this poem is SO SO SO SO SO SO sad!!! i can relate to it SO SOS SO SO SO (lol) well!!!!! i really like the descriptiveness of this poem!!!!! great write!!!! keep up the good work!!!! good luck on the contest!!!
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