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Apologies

As easy as it should be
this is my apology
I cant bring myself to speak
so words placed on paper
is what it will be.

My eyes arent fixed on you
and my heart doesnt want to listen
I've seen all the lies
and who have been in them.

I apologize for not being enough
and not staying true
but I couldnt bring myself
to tell you the truth.

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Written July 15th, 2005

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  • L8 Bloomer
    July 16, 2005
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    Troublesome

    This is a very good peice of work. Express yourself to the highest level. Though I do Fear the meaning and reason for this poem.


  • Traffic Flag
    July 15, 2005
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    Hey dear! =)

    I really like this!!

    It's odd sort of.
    But I like it anyway =)=)

    Lovely ♥

  • KateP
    July 15, 2005
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    very true. It is so hard to apologise to someone face to face. But writing it is a good first step... nice work
    K