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My bitch

Kami, my bitch
the dark
the crazy
the unbearable
glitch in this
world of flowers,
and sun




creased with shortness
full of love yes shes
my bitch now reaching
the age of fifteen she
carried the stillness
and love that was
possed when she was
twelve



growing up fast
but changing
slowly, my bitch
is the best



KAMI I LOVE YOU LIKE A SISTER!!!!!

Author notes

of course i chose Kami for this poem.........enjoy
Written July 14th, 2005

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  • Sjr
    July 15, 2005
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    wooohooo! i love this. funny in a messed up way. which is the only way to be. keep it up. yay.


  • NotMyShadeOfGray
    July 15, 2005
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    lol!! hey now, i can be your bitch too! I'm Kate's bitch on one week and Joy's bitch the next. It's a schedule that works really well! lol


  • UnderTheFloorboards
    July 15, 2005
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    lol this is funny... Kami is the greatest person in the world..lol hey she was my bitch.. you stole her lol okay well I am done being a ball ass..lol so yea this is great and I guess since it is the first entry then it is my favorite..lol
    great job
    Joyus Kiddey


  • xXRawerxX
    July 15, 2005
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    awesome:-)

    This is funnie Yes Kami is quiet the bitch but we all love her like a sister...This is deep and very well written and it describes her quiet well...Keep up the awesome work
    Love Always,
    ~Katherine~

  • NotMyShadeOfGray
    July 15, 2005
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    LOL!! Kate this is great! yup, you're right, I'm your bitch, lol. But you and Sameltoe are my sex kittens so HA! lol, ahh I feel so loved! lol great write!
    s and s
    ~Kami

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