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10. Gone With the Wind Medley: Main Theme/Tara's Theme/Dixie and the Battle

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I have been searching for such a long time,
asking everyone I meet for their key to the rhyme
and for the reason as they see things.
What is it that a man like me brings?

Too many reasons to stay,
too many reasons to go,
too much confusion today,
too few answers we know.

O' such a long time since i've thought of myself
or wanted to put those games back on the shelf.
Now that I'm finally free,
there's just one question left in me.

What became of her and me?
Her games took to long to get free.
I was used again as her number three
and got the best of both worlds till I caught on
and saw the puppeteer, now I am gone.
You had me up against the wall,
made me feel two inches tall.
You had reasons I wanted to believe
but they were traps set to deceive.
The soul within my frame,
the power of the flame,
there was no winner in this game.
Now things can't be the same;
things could never be the same

Best of both worlds, deception's the key;
you pulled off your scam I was too blind to see.
I thought you said
I thought you said
I thought you said.
There isn't room for three in my bed.
I thought I was old enough to know better.
You can have it all,  go get her
go get her
go get her

I knew that I would wind up a king or a fool with you;
you broke the golden rule, its true.
I was never meant to be the king for you.
Go back to your silver screen friends,
they don't care where they get the money, as long as it spends

So I'll walk away the fool
and you'll do your act so cool.
Isn't it a pity that you can't conceal?
The divorce is oh so real -
not an act nor game for gain.
Was it really worth the pain?

Tell them all the stories that will make you look so good.
Such a gentle lady but so misunderstood.
I'll let you keep your face, I won't let you fall,
I just want off your stage my dear, and you can have it all.

I was your leading man    your pet you called me Ram;   now I'm not so
and,  frankly dear,  I don't give a damn.


(with apologies to Miss Scarlet)





Author notes

Ram once again you left me standing alone in the rain
As I trace the tracks of your tears sorrow in forever pain
Whispers in the dark a black rose in a forgotten rain
Who is the winner or loser in this lover's 5-1 game?
O' beloved sing me another fairy tale from your heart of blue veils
You will stand afar because there is danger in touching your heart
You will trysail upon the lonely seas because you long for love tenderly
Yet you touch the pools of sage blooming within three in scarlet solitary
Torrent winds rains of eternal daylilies we burn as one flame in desire
You can whisper all your harmonies to me yet yesterday has set us free
And time cannot erase the painful melodies upon your face
As I linger in your solitary love that is nameless within grace

 

(with apologies to RAM I Love You)

Written July 14th, 2005

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 15, 2007

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    Happy-Sad~

    I am so glad you have touched the soul of love through the dance of lyrical poetry... One may come, and one may go, but love remains truth we bestow... You're full of hope, and enjoy others when they smile, how I love you through the miles. Heaven is a state of mind, and soul..I shall never let darkness take control.. I shall love thee eternally... As the light shines on you, the truth shall unfold. Oh how I love you so.. I never meant to leave you lonely, inscribed, your only~


    -poeticweaver xo


    • Sharon Corr gold member
      July 16, 2007
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      Dear Timothy,
      “The good you do today,
      will often be forgotten.
      Do good anyway.

      Give the best you have,
      and it may never be enough;
      Give your best anyway.

      In the final analysis,
      it is between you and God;
      It was never between you and them anyway.”

      --Mother Teresa--


  • rite
    July 15, 2007

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    The further the front edge of a proces becomes removed from the process foundation, the bigger the implications of change becomes. Though the principle remains, all else within the frame of logic defined by the foundation, changes. Like in all chaotic processes the base determines the process nature and direction. In processes of great complexity after time few involved with the process are aware of the properties of the foundation - people are capable of functioning well without having knowledge of the essence. The keepers of the process are the only ones who are familiar with the process' foundation. They are the ones who manipulate others with their excess of knowledge. Their entire life is intimately entwined with the basic principles, they are not able to move away from it other than through death. The entire pyramid like power hierarchy within the system divides knowledge and reponsability from those with full knowledge down to the ignorant. Systems consume people, systems of truth, systems of lies. Having knowledge beyond what was extended on a need to know basis can be dangerous, often cause for assassination if the system's secrets must be protected at all cost. Appearance of the knowledgeable can be quite deceptive; it is a property applied to maintain and extend the system. It is easy to become involved with such systems. Most will never find out its principles, but some do. It is why some appear perfectly happy within the system's frame while others look for ways to expose the true nature of what captivates people. I enjoyed being here to read and ponder. Thank you for creating and sharing. May The Light flood you and keep you safe in ITS protection.

    Chris


    • Sharon Corr gold member
      July 15, 2007
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      Thank you my dear friend Chris, I need to think and ponder your deep insights. I’m still floating on Cloud Nine. I love your comment. ~XXX Love and Hugs, Sharon~


  • Jalalbad gold member
    July 5, 2007

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    sad

    and a feeling of rejection of which I am aquainted with
    reminded me of it's relationship with me once again while reading this. May God bless.


    • Sharon Corr gold member
      July 7, 2007

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      Dear Jalollybad,
      Thank you for your kind and warm comment! I’m grateful you reveled to me this poem has meaning in your life. It is sad, but life is for the living. Destiny may give us another chance to dance in love and happiness. Every word I’ve penned is true. May God bless you and yours eternally. ~Namaste Blessed Be, Sharon~



  • Midnight Fairy
    August 3, 2005
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    This is a sad and touching poem. You put a lot of emotion into it and it's beautiful. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    July 21, 2005
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    "Real Beauty lies in Love"


    Rivage someone is calling to me
    I long to find out who in destiny
    You're looking at the reflections of our minds
    An eternal love that blooms thru space and time
    What is the most significant here there and everywhere
    This wondrous man set me free; he loves deeply wild and free
    He is a magic man someone you adorn within your hands
    And if i look back upon the seven seas of my life
    He has forever been the story in my eyes
    His love is the holy breath of the Garden of Eden's paradise
    I sail on softly within the colour of his heavenly sapphire eyes
    His love brings such happiness and sunshine in pure delight
    And loving him feels so right, as we soar in cosmic insight
    We touch the sky; we touch impassioned love in our minds eye
    Within a romance that is meant to be, we sing of our destiny
    Wrapped as one in the loving arms of the Lords Eternal Glory.
    Who do I see deep within my minds eye, as we love the same
    A man who walks inside my heart for all eternity in one lovers flame.
    We seek unity peace freedom, and our passionate kiss can't be tamed.
    Thank you for your words of love and being a kind compassionate friend.
    "Isn't life strange", we turn the page, and our poetry seeds are blooming once again.
    I long to be one in his heartstrings
    Yet this tender songbird needs to free,
    As I sing I give you my love tenderly
    I love him on the wings of the wind
    I long to stay by his side as we begin
    My soul at ease within our manderine breeze
    Here is my hand and before you I stand
    Beyond the quicksand of time in our rhythm rhyme.
    Namaste Blessed Be, to you and yours eternally, AngelEyes711.


    Edited on Jul 21, 5:26 p.m. because ''.


  • Rivage
    July 21, 2005
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    Hello?! How do you come up with this magnificent stuff? Even the comment you left was a little poem, and it make my knees al weak just reading it..
    Thank you for entering. Rivage

  • Mickie27
    July 16, 2005
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    You always bring me into your poems and I become lost in them. You are so wonderfully expressed in the way you write. You know how to put your words together to have effect on the reader. You really wrote an amazingly beautifully and gentle loving poem here and I loved reading it.

  • crimson rivers
    July 16, 2005
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    The word flowed so freely and they were so deep, I really really love this poem! Well done, you are amazingly talented! Please anymore like this and I'll be hooked!


  • The burner
    July 16, 2005
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    a most beautiful poem, angel eyes. it has that fairy tale feeling. feelings are well done. really, sometimes girls look for something more in love than just love and then it makes the love go sour.


  • The burner
    July 16, 2005
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    a most beautiful poem, angel eyes. it has that fairy tale feeling. feelings are well done.


  • Touchof1der silver member
    July 16, 2005
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    This is just a most stunning amd passionate piece of writing. I sit in awe of your incredible talent here. There is great beauty in your words.

  • woodwiccan
    July 16, 2005
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    great

    immensely passionate


  • Donjo1030
    July 16, 2005
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    nice

    Nice write. sadness and joy all rolled into one.


  • LadyUnique silver member
    July 16, 2005
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    this is great! you've chosen your words well and showed them off in the form you've chosen to use.
    i see this as a poem of strength despite heartbreak

  • The Broken One
    July 16, 2005
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    This was really a great collaboration...of course, it's the only one I've ever read. But the words are so lovely and the flow is so easy that I was just wrapped up in it all. You expressed yourself(s) well, I enjoyed it a lot. Great write! I hope that you both experience true love with someone that lasts forever. I think everyone should...but then, I'm a romantic. Anyways, this is one of the best poems I've read on here so keep 'em coming.


  • Pallas Athena
    July 16, 2005
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    Bravo!! This is well done, and flows so well. I couldn't hear the music, but I could feel it non-the-less. Good luck in the contest. AThena

  • noel lovett
    July 16, 2005
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    lovely work

    Your words {unbelievably talented} expressive and heart felt


  • lovestinks
    July 16, 2005
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    im at a loss of words... seriousally. This write is DEEP. Very great write... for the most part it flowed very nicely. - thanx for sharing

  • RiderOnTheStorm
    July 16, 2005
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    my name is peace this is my hour

    and frankly dear, i dont give a damn. hell yeah man, thats waht im talkin about. nice ending line. awesome write. thanks for sharing with everybody. the text kind of hurts my eyes though.


  • July 16, 2005
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    perception of deception leads to inception of freedom in your write. Thanks for sharing!


  • Phoenix Karkadann
    July 16, 2005
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    Beautiful and sad piece! this should do well in the contest! good luck!


  • PiratexxLove
    July 15, 2005
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    "Tell them all the stories that will make you look so good.
    Such a gentle lady but so misunderstood.
    I'll let you keep your face, I won't let you fall,
    I just want off your stage my dear, and you can have it all.

    I was your leading man your pet you called me Ram; now I'm not so
    and, frankly dear, I don't give a damn. "
    WOW This is emotional and deep within its limits... I like it alot.. The picture and the background really add a touch of sentimental values... Creative work and congrats i love it

  • archenemy3
    July 15, 2005
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    A very good poem, but I think the rythym was just a little choppy for a while in there, but this is still one of the best ones I've read on here.

  • Molly Densmore silver member
    July 15, 2005
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    A wonderful poem, I really liked it and it shows your talent. very descriptive and creative. great job and great write, thank you for sharing it.


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    July 15, 2005
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    A loving comment, opening my true heart.


    My Beloved Chris thank you for this wonderful message, this is the truth and my real life re-occurring dream. And I can back up what I say, and say what I mean. RAM takes me on a merry-go-round of truth, light, love, and learning. I love to connect with my old friends and touch the light of my soul. RAM is a special gift as you my beloved Chris and a dearly loved friend. But as far as a lover there is someone else gently tapping upon my secret garden. “Just what the truth is I can’t say anymore”. But I cannot deny the flame. Ram is a secret admirer for sure. But in real life, I know Justin Hayward. And every time we meet there are electric blue sparks flying everywhere. All I can say is that RAM opened many doors. And the universe brings me in reality to Justin. I don’t know how other people look at the signs and the dreams in their lives. But when someone crosses my path over and over again. I take this as a miracle sign and wonder. So, if the truth is RAM is another man, well then RAM opened the truth and all the doors to Justin’s dreams and both our heart forevermore. I have always deeply loved Justin, and I’m not going to stop now. I perceive much more in Justin than his outer image. I know him to be a supremely talented angelic being. In a private email I will write to you of the many ways we have crossed paths in our every day lives. All I know is in my heart and dreams he is the portrait on the wall. Or there is someone who looks exactly like him. However, “ we decided which is right and which is an illusion”. Ram is loving but undercover. Justin has been real in my life, and I do see the light. The songs all meant for him. And I will never stop loving Justin. I have stood with him face-to-face, eye-to-eye, and he told me volumes on a non-verbal level. Never in my life, has time stopped with another human being on this Earth. When I meet Justin, time stops every time. I don’t know how, I can’t even explain this to you. I am outgoing Chris, I meet people all the time and for that matter so does Justin. But when we meet, he fixes his gaze upon me, and I’m a puddle of love. My friends, who know me well, know I can communicate. When I met Justin face to face, and eye-to-eye, the only thing that would come out of my lips was the word Justin, then I froze and could not say anything. I did not know what is wrong with me? Nothing would come out of my voice? Then that crazy thing happens with time stopping, and we just stare at each other. Who is the road I choose, it’s a wonderful feeling with Justin. This I will never deny. But who am I? You sometimes know things when you meet another soul that is pure of heart. Both Justin and I, as you my beloved Chris, are pure of heart. This is why others can take advantage of us. And we have to breathe deep to earn each other’s trust, respect, and honour. I for one am curious as the cat. Why does time stop every time I meet Justin? I actually mean time stops. Only he is in the room and everything just disappears. And only the two of us are enlaced and entwined in some kind of loving vortex. Strange as this may seem, this also happened one time with the dolphins in Hawaii. But only once. With Justin this has happened four times in real life. And within thousands of songs and poems that reach us both in the morning light. Tell me how can love be wrong and feel this right? I am aware and yes I can see clearly for others. And sometimes fail for myself. Justin is a self-realized and self-actualized being. And we both know what we feel. Love is mystical, Love is magically for sure. Who can explain this thing called love between a man and a woman? Every poet dreams of just the right poem or love song that will bring the winds east by west, to journey as one in a delightful lovers quest. However this true experience of time stopping is divine TRUTH, and takes me upon a journey where I can feel in other realms. Who would I choose in the beginning or the end? And who fits my heart and soul like a pair of old running shoes. Well let this be the truth to you. I would choose Justin, for the truth is the truth. And GOD preordains something’s. This is the truth. And GOD’S time is GOD’S time. And the more I think about the other person, who is RAM, we are wonderful as professional writers, we love, we love deeply, we see eye to eye, and heart to heart. However, as far as who would be here in real life to share my hand its someone as Justin. Thank you for the loving and precious words you send to teach me and enlighten my heart and soul once again. My heart is calling and always falling. Romance is the sweetest emotion and when two people feel the same flame love is right and love blooms even if we are two thousand miles away. There is still hope that one day we can be near each other, and be the shelter of each other’s heart. I have to do what I feel is right. And I’m standing in the light, and Justin is the reflection in my eyes. We both reach out for each other, and magic smiles, bloom. Bottom line we are in bodies, we have unique yet small amount of time to be here so why not take your love to the limit! Namaste, Blessed Be, to you and yours eternally, Sharron.


  • rite
    July 15, 2005
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    I once had a weird experience. I woke up injured (infection) from an adventure in a dream. I was not able to recollect the dream into detail, merely sense the atmosphere that I had experienced in it. Perhaps some have similar experiences, not to the extend of having physical injury as a result perhaps, but rather lasting feelings that are not noticeable to others. It becomes more strange when matters in dreams re-occur and it is quite difficult to explain, because people in general have a distorted conception of reality. The worlds you write about at times interfere leading to events that are poorly understood in at least one of them. But from personal experience I can vow there are some who are aware of this and willingly active in this intersecting realm. It is the nature of the interference that determines the feelings the dreamers are left with. This was a poem that concealed a great deal more than would be obvious at first glance. It is always a pleasure to visit your pages, read and ponder. Thank you precious soul,

    Chris


  • hugh wyles silver member
    July 15, 2005
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    Dear Sharron,
    Psst! Just a couple of "i's" in the sixth stanza that should be capital "I's". Otherwise it looks good now.
    Love and hugs, XXX Hugh.


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    July 14, 2005
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    Darling, Loving you is as easy as 1 2 3.


    -Timothy The Poetic Weaver~
    Song Sung Blue if only you knew
    "Cupid he rules us all"
    You bloom you fade
    And i am left in the masquerade
    Wondering where is the fire of lovers’ desire
    As you sing divine love swings our way
    Comes a time even the fairest maid
    Has to find her way, even if you sing me your song
    Love is in love with honey love, where we belong
    Your kiss is eternal in your blue heart a nightingale song
    "Love conquers all" more valuable than worthless gold
    As our blue rose blooms and fades on our lonely road
    I have always been true to your heart in songs sung blue
    As you reminisce in fleeting romance where is the heart of you?
    What you see is the truth when your sweet smile turns blue
    Could you not believe all that you see, or was it all too much
    That it was better to let this rose wilt and die my beloved?
    Twas once upon a midsummer dream you came to thee
    You came with love in fires of desire a dance to lift us at the break of day
    Than in our lover’s aftermath your sweet love fades in hymns at heaven gate
    ~XXX, Love, Hugs, Kisses, Darling you know I love you, we have to keep the drama our state~


  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 14, 2005
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    Lovely My Dear!

    Song...sung...blue...if only you knew....
    Who is to say, when we are to pray...
    That one day this divine love swings are way
    Leaving a trail of emptiness,
    you with regret...seeming upset...
    As always your love you confess....

    Wishing your timeless song to reach where it belongs...

    Loving you, is easy baby...hope you know this is true...

    Love me, I love you, thanks for being so true!

    -Timothy The Poetic Weaver~


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    July 14, 2005
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    I love you my Lord and King.


    ~My Beloved King of Hearts Hugh R~
    Thankfulness for your loving kisses
    I will joyfully email this draft to you ASAP
    As you know i have no idea where to edit
    As i send my love and belated regrets
    In a love i can never erase or forget.
    In gratitude I am deeply honoured for your gift
    In editing and polishing this timeless song
    As i linger in your love and heartbeat all night long.
    ~XXX Love, Hugs, Kisses, to you and yours, Sharron~


  • hugh wyles silver member
    July 14, 2005
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    Dear Sharron,
    Your poem is little short of BRILLIANT (subject to a few small corrections) but I have to say, quite frankly that I find your Author's comment superfluous and tending to overstatement.
    If you care to email the draft of your poem (not the comment) I would be honoured and happy to do the small amount of editing required to polish it. Applause.
    Love and hugs, XXX Hugh.
    Edited on Jul 14, 9:16 p.m. because 'forgot to close brackets!'.


  • HeWillAlwaysBeAFool
    July 14, 2005
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    Wow... this is really good!
    Awesome! You should enter this in a contest or something!
    ~Sarah

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