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Inner Feelings

Just one look from you and I can feel the peace in my heart.
When you are near I feel secure.

You are the first man that I know that makes me feel whole.
I have been married and been with others.

But....

None of them made me feel safe in my soul.
Just when I thought love was gone.
You stepped into my life and now I know
that love can last forever.

I wish you could see how you capture my
heart each time that you look at me.

Yvonne J. Griffin
12/18/02

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*sigh* If he only knew.
Written December 18th, 2002

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  • rgrpaperboy
    April 19, 2003
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    A really great nicely written poem. I hope someday soon I will meet someone whom I can think these words about. You have an excellent poem here. Thanks for the words. Rick


  • Rubee
    December 22, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    I know exactly how this feels...just when you think love will never exist for you again, there it is...I hope you'll be able to tell him..or better yet, show him this piece..it might just melt his heart...beautifully written Yvonne!!! good luck!!! *hugs*


  • Roseleaf
    December 22, 2002
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    excellent

    yes Beautiful yet know how you feel just knowing you can get that feeling specially after being married you want to hold on to that loving feeling
    you'll know when the time is right
    HuGs to You Yvonne @-->->
    Pauline xox


  • myrataal silver member
    December 19, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Yes, I agree with Gozy ... and not need not to listen to Twigg: you may create a love story by telling him ... ;) Hugs, Myra

  • Twigglett
    December 19, 2002
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    neutral

    hmmmm i think i know how ur feeling here. It was mor eof a story than a poem. But im just ignorant so dont listen to me :) Twigg


  • December 18, 2002
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    excellent

    tell him :)
    lol

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