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A moment alone

When I'm alone,
i like to think about my life,
and how fast time passes by.
I remember the first day i went to school,
and boy, was I a fool,
to believe all I was gonna do was play,
instead i had to read and write all day.
I remember i used to love playing basketball,
until i got my cellphone and made phone calls.
however, many people wondered why i was so quiet,
and over and over again i would explain,
it was because i never had anything to say.
on my time alone, i like to reflect...
on how i have changed,
and what my goals are for the future,
and just as i begin to relax...
my moment alone...
is GONE...

Author notes

hi everybody, this is another one of those poems that is personal and it is another opportunity for you to get to know me better ... so enjoy
Written July 14th, 2005

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  • angel305
    July 20, 2005
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    thankx

    thankx ma, i am ok for the moment ttyl


  • sky black
    July 20, 2005
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    aww babe hope you're ok, and yeh sadly people do change over time, in good and bad ways...i used to be a complete tomboy and play sports and now i dont go near the PE office...anyway you're fine the way you are dont change for no-one, l8az love ya sky xxxx

  • preciouscatie
    July 17, 2005
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    awesome

    lmao juana this poem is so true i remember when i used to ask you that like 4 times a day but its true with your poems ppl can get the idea of your personality and even though you are quiet sometimes you still come out and party with me lmao remember the concert lol i thought we all had a blast!!!hope to have more moments like those...love ya lots cat


  • lostsouls12
    July 14, 2005
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    this is a really good poem. i can really get to know you through the words and the emotion behind them.