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Peeping (An EROTIC tale about a VOYEUR)

Edna is publishing this confession which was made to her by a strange old man she met in jail whilst carrying out her duties as a voluntary prison visitor.  She is unable to reveal the writer's name or else the warders would give him a severe working over and the prisoners would give him a bit of a bashing too.


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I am a 68 year old pervert from Bournemouth. I love to watch naked women. And for this purpose I made many small holes in the bathrooms and and bedrooms of the guest house which I run in Bournemouth; I have also installed video cameras to film all the goings on and I have a bank of screens in my bedroom. You will probably not be surprised to find out that I have also made a few holes in the public toilet on the ground floor so I can watch people doing their business there.

You can rest assured that there have been very few guests in my place whose anatomy I have not examined carefully. I especially enjoy looking at women's bottoms. A nice pair of bottom cheeks always makes me very horny. I quite like men's bottoms too, but not as much as women's. At the moment, in prison, beggars can't be choosers.

If I were to write and tell you of all the many thousands of naked people I have seen, of the many thousands of acts of copulation, urination and defecation I have observed and recorded (initially on VHS, but more recently on state of the art DVD) you would be surprised. Also it would take a very long time.

What I would like to tell you about is one particular incident which has stuck in my mind and which I have spent many happy hours masturbating over here in my cell. When I get out of here, the first thing I shall do when I get home will be to dig out the tape and play it over and over again until I have wanked myself to sleep.

About ten years ago I was catering for a wedding reception at my little hotel and the bride was GORGEOUS. She was aged about 30 and she was VERY FAT. Whilst my staff were attending to the guests I literally prayed for her to go to the toilet so that I could see her naked bum. I was desperate to see it as it promised to be utterly fabulous.

I suppose I must have neglected my duties as proprietor as I kept whizzing out of the kitchen to check on the screens every few minutes. Finally the bride needed a loo visit and I was there glued to the screens to see which cubicle she went into. When she had made her selection I let the camera roll and went into close-up mode.

She was in the cubicle now and, to my amazement, she slipped off her wedding dress, hung it on the hook and stood there in bra and panties. She was fucking glorious: huge tits, stomach bulging over her knickers and arse-cheeks protruding on both sides. My dick was in my right hand by now, ready for action.

She then shocked me. She took out an enormous black dildo from her hand bag, pulled down her knickers and started the clockwork motor and masturbated herself to a climax which made her wads of fat shiver like a row of jellies at a children's party. Clearly she was not waiting for the joys of the wedding night (although I have to say that I watched that later, courtesy of the video camera installed in the bridal suite and she was certainly a bit of a goer with her new husband: three fucks and two blow-jobs).

As you may imagine I wanked like crazy during the delectable scene in my toilet cubicle and came like a tornado onto my studio carpet. After coming, she took a dump (I enjoyed this but my pleasure was somewhat muted by having just come myself), got dressed, flushed the toilet and left the cubicle, looking a little flushed herself.

This event is the sexual pinnacle of my life. I calculate I have masturbated 184 times over it (plus a few failed attempts).

 

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Author notes

I know I promised not to sneak on the identity of this pervert, but I lied. He is none other than Benjamin Butt, the Beast of Bournemouth.

If you're into voyeurism, you will enjoy the tale of Victor the Voyeur at allpoetry.com/poem/1407600 .

And how about a round of applause for Benjamin Butt?
Written on 14th July, 2005 (Bastille Day).

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  • Bob Fox
    November 22, 2007
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    lol

    do you like to be watched?


    • Edna Sweetlove
      November 22, 2007
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      Very much indeed. This reminds me of a true story or two I have written up. When I trace the links I'll send you them.


  • Shade Aurelia
    March 24, 2007

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    This was quite disturbing, I must admit. I'd hope that this man sees his errors and such things, but I have a feeling he won't. Sad case, really. But oh well. Good write.


    Shade


  • ogene
    March 24, 2007
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    Really, I think you just narrated the poor guy's entire life in his cell. I would'nt like to be in his shoes though, but it was a great tale. I wish people like me could be this real in narrating our own stories

    BRAVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • nike gold member
    July 20, 2006
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    Quite the tale of the tail of a whale. I hope he enjoys his videos but washes his hands before he goes back to catering or does he have some special sauces that he offers.

    Keep writing.


  • June 20, 2006
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    Too Good

    That was good. Can u expand your experiences further.

  • Waterdog77
    September 12, 2005
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    What a twisted sexual work of art.
    I can only imagine what your web cam looks like.
    Probably, twisted old perverts.com. LOL
    Overall, good poetry writing.

  • Edna Sweetlove
    September 12, 2005
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    No, you would be incorrect on the former point.
    Interesting, yes.


  • captain splat
    September 12, 2005
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    Would I be correct in saying "what a load of shit?"
    An interesting piece of work..lol

  • Edna Sweetlove
    September 11, 2005
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    Gee thanks.


  • barefoot contessa silver member
    August 15, 2005
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    Aunt Edna. This was interesting.... lol
    Edited on Sep 12, 3:35 because 'I misspelled a word. Go me. skunk bangs '.


  • GiveMeTheGun
    July 31, 2005
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    loved it

    dude.. i actually picked up on this! haha i liked it a lot, great job. *goes to look up some porn now*
    >.>
    <.<

  • buffytheparrotslaye
    July 19, 2005
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    Couldnt be Sweeter!

    Edna you just get sweeter and sweeter.That dirty old man and boy there are so many of them around.You wrote in a very erotic and raw way which really suits this piece.By the way I hope he is not due for parole anytime soon!


  • Edna Sweetlove
    July 19, 2005
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    I am intrigued by your comments! Is there a voyeurs' group on AP I can join? Wow! And now I have an idea for my next contest - I'm laying out a stake to it here and now!

  • Legion Mesmer
    July 18, 2005
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    Are you the eyes behind the man at the peephole? Is that where you find yourself? Is your flare for this genre an affectation, or embrasure of your true nature? Do you dance this dance, or is it all in jest? Or are you unsure, just testing the ice before daring to skate? Hell is filled with such as these. Join us. We have many things to show you.

    Legion Mesmer


  • Poetic Fury
    July 17, 2005
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    Gee-zus. You really created a work of art here. That is certainly a once-in-a-life-time, story-you'll-never-forget kind of experience, isn't it? I actually had to go back and read parts twice, you don't leave things out, and that's good. this is well done. You really capture this personality well and you bring the reader deep into the person's psyche--so much so that it unnerves us. Good luck in this contest, and keep up the great writing!


  • Blkwidow77 silver member
    July 17, 2005
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    0-0 ..... ~dies laughing~

    My god! I just read with my mouth open the entire time! ~blinks~ Whether that was real, or you were just going off of imagination... is irrevelant! That was great! The perversion of the human race never fails to amaze me.... but god damn... some of it makes for really great story telling!

    I'd tell you good luck but I don't think you'll need it.

  • Edna Sweetlove
    July 17, 2005
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    Probably the people who read it and didn't comment were too thick.


  • Emerald13
    July 15, 2005
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    many visits and no one commenting hum ? .... its certainly in your face and way out of my orbit of experience .... and i didnt skim ... from the title of the contest it might just be the right content ... ::: sigh ::: I have no idea ... good luck with it >>>>> EM

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