Desperate enough to kill
Even if its you that dies
So hold out your wrist and say your last words
Please remember...I do this because I love you.
Only one swipe of the blade
Now it will all be over soon
Dont cry my love
Everything will be all right
Never will you suffer again
Cause I've taken it all away
You dont understand, but thats ok
Author notes
I dont know if many people will get this but it's like there is...hmm...its sort of a dual meaning poem...Its like me, talking to myself and also could be me talking to someone else..get it?
Fuck Face!
commented on:My New Room by Cyberartist
Written July 14th, 2005
A contest entry
- Too Weird for the World 2!!! by skitza.
500 points, ended August 29, 2005, 88 entries
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Yeah I get it.. great poem! It is short and to the point. I can relate if this is to do with love. I have written poems very similar to this, in fact.
I like the ending a lot. It made it really sad actually. And I like the double-meaning. Very clever.
Thanks for entering and following the rules and good luck!
skitza
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